I heeded the warning and waited to read until I got home. Good thing too, my co-workers would've really been wondering why I was drooling so much. GUH!!!!
I'll be honest and admit I was a little...concerned at the thought of a foursome with these guys. I really like the way you've shown Dee & Ryo's relationship and how committed they are to each other. But this was very well done - each of them making sure the other was okay with what they were doing. I think it was a good choice to have Dee & Ryo concentrating on Ianto at first, and having Jack as an eager observer - it worked.
I'll be honest and admit that we had our own reservations at first. But they're honestly so similar -- especially in our minds, and that was before Torchwood came along -- that having them be friends with benefits would be perfectly okay as well.
Now that I am woman of the blue lips I wanted to make a sensible comment and one that makes sense.
I was really please with the way the boys transitioned to the foursome. This is well written and showed how much respect the two couples have for each other.
There was absolutely no way that two huge shippers like us could write something like this and have them split up because of it. They do respect and admire each other, and there is love between the four of them -- it's just not as deep as it is between Jack and Ianto and Ryo and Dee.
I love the intricacy here ... not of the sex though that is *********************guh woman*************** ... but of the relationships. The way they all defer to Ianto ... making sure he is okay with it ... just ... works so well.
Well, as we all know, it's really the subs who have all the power in those kinds of relationships. ;)
I'm so glad that it's been positive so far. That's something we really wanted to focus on, the relationships and not just the sex. The four of them make a very good unit.
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Thanks for reading, sweetheart!
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That's about as much sense as I can make now.
Going to take a cold shower to recover from the hotness.
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I was really please with the way the boys transitioned to the foursome. This is well written and showed how much respect the two couples have for each other.
Nicely done.
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There was absolutely no way that two huge shippers like us could write something like this and have them split up because of it. They do respect and admire each other, and there is love between the four of them -- it's just not as deep as it is between Jack and Ianto and Ryo and Dee.
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I'm so glad that it's been positive so far. That's something we really wanted to focus on, the relationships and not just the sex. The four of them make a very good unit.
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