Torchwood -- No One Else Would Have Me

[gracie_musica]

Title: No One Else Would Have Me
dwtwprompts prompt: Heartsick
Date Written: 9/9/08
Rating: PG/K+
Word Count: 404
Fandom: Torchwood
Characters/Pairings: Jack/Ianto, Gwen/Rhys, Gwen/?
Spoilers: Set during Kiss Kiss Bang Bang
Warnings: None
Author Notes: Massively unbetaed, all screw-ups are mine. This can be blamed on totally4ryo, since it's her (very first Torchwood

Comments

[teachwriteslash]

Actually - that kind of didn't do to me what I expected.

I sort of see it as an "in your face Jack" type of thing.

*************Hmmmmmm ponders why this actually made her hoot with laughter************

[gracie_musica]

Then... is it allowed as a bribe? *hopeful*

[teachwriteslash]

Possibly we will call it "notabribe."

[etmuse]

Wow, that's a bunny and a half

(and oddly, I'm with teach on this... it read to me like a 'you snooze, you lose' :P:P:P to Jack)

[gracie_musica]

*laughs* Thanks, I'm glad that you liked it.

[luvinthe88and20]

Hmm. I agree with everybody you snooze you lose Jack. I say after dealing after with John Jack goes and hooks back with Doc and travels with him again.

[gracie_musica]

*laughs* No, knowing Jack, he probably stays. *laughs* He's such a masochist.

[luvinthe88and20]

Probably but wait than if he stays he can hook up with Tosh or Martha.

[totally4ryo]

I kinda picture Jack staying -- and being alone (except for the one night shags), watching Gwen and Ianto, realizing just how badly he screwed up. Well, that was the original idea when the plotbunny bit. It was supposed to have been my first Torchwood (only - no crossover) fic, but ended up writing for the horizonssing challenge. After all that Janto, I told Gracie I didn't think I can write anything but Jack and Ianto together (and thus Gwen and Rhys), so I let her have it.

It's amazing -- I just told her the general plotbunny, but what's here is very close to what I initially imaged. Chances are Gracie also did it much better than I would.

[mbs_library]

Do you have any idea how many questions you've got me mentally asking myself now? I would smack you and demand more information, but somehow I suspect you wouldn't want to answer a one. :D

MB

[gracie_musica]

Promises, promises!

I like to answer questions, so fire away. Just a) it's a one shot and b) it's not originally my plot bunny.

[thrace_adams]

Wow! Never saw that coming. Hmm...now I'm thinking...are Ianto and Gwen a possibility? Definitely seems in your face to Jack that the two people that were interested in him are now with each other...kind of a poetic justice you might say...I liked it! (although the majority of my brain feels badly for Jack because of everything he went through...)

[gracie_musica]

*laughs* Yeah, it is insult to injury, isn't it?

Glad that you liked it!