FIC: Waiting (For You) (James/Teddy, NC-17)

[gracerene]

Title: Waiting (For You)
Author: gracerene
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairings: James Sirius/Teddy
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~3,000
Content/Warnings: established relationship, dirty talk, frottage, hand jobs, mild come play, rimming, fingering, post-sex fingering, first time topping, bottom!teddy, implied switching
Summary: James tops. Set in the Are You Mine?

Comments

[writcraft]

Guh. I think my brain melted for a moment there. This is so hot, jeepers. I love James being both cocky and a bit nervous and the banter between them. First times are always a fail safe for me, and this was such a treat to read.

Really nice job. Thoroughly enjoyed it.

[gracerene]

Thank you so much, hon! I definitely wanted to balance James being his cocky self in a relationship with his best friend, with the nervousness of a first time. And agree, first times are pretty bulletproof for me. :D

<3

[_melodic_]

Oh god it's even better the second time around!! GAH!

"And when you're too sore, when you've taken my cock so good and so long that you're wrecked from it-" James was rutting desperately against Teddy now, driven crazy by the dirty voice in his ear, the amazing finger in his arse, and the thick erection sliding hot and hard against his own. "Then you'll fuck me, Jamie. Bend me over and shove that fat prick of yours inside my arse. Ride me until I'm mindless from it, until you fill me up with your come.

I just melt from this, I am a pile of goo!

James looked back at Teddy's hole, his gaze drawn there as if magnetised. "I want to taste you. Can I-fuck I just want to put my mouth on you."

YES, TASTE HIM JAMES!

"How 'bout you, Jamie? You like it? Like the way my arse feels so fucking tight around your cock? You going to come, Jamie? Going to fucking come in my arse?"

yes!!!

He thrust a few more times, watching with primal satisfaction as his come trickled out of Teddy's entrance with each thrust.
YES

[gracerene]

Aww, thank you so much, lovely! :D

I'm so thrilled you liked this so much! Thank for helping me polish it up! <3

[shiftylinguini]

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!! James/Teddy!! The topping scene from your fic series! Dedicated to MEEE!!!???!! Back after work, omg I cannot wait to read this (I love your boys, and those tags, oh lord, they sound so good *bites fist*)

[shiftylinguini]

OMG, this is so hot and perfect and skdjg1 and OMG I TOTALLY REMEMBER being shameless and saying I wanted to read James topping and I'm so happyy to hear you had already started thisssss!!! I *love* how it leads right on from their first time, and omgggggg the fingering, how can I be expected to be coherent after that, that was just, sdjfhsj! That's my goddamn Achilles heel lol!

omgosh, and they were just perfect together, and so hot and wonderful, and James being nervous and Teddy just being confident and, argh, the wonderful familiarity!

James rolled his eyes, Teddy's ridiculous sense of humour reminding him that he didn't have anything to be nervous about, not with Teddy. "Alright Casanova, why don't you get down on your stomach then."

I LOVE THEM! and this:

"Well savour some other ti-ime. I want you to fuck me before I come." Teddy's body shifted and a moment later the tube of lube hit James on the side of the head.

"Alright, alright!"OMG THE LUBE HITTING HIM ON THE HEAD ahaha, I love the banter and ease of their

[gracerene]

Awww, you!!! You are just the best! <3

Haha, yeah, you mentioned it months and month ago when you were reading the main fic, and it made me super happy, because I'd already started writing this! Great minds. :D

I'm so thrilled you enjoyed the dynamic between these two. I love writin them, particularly because it's such a different dynamic than H/D, and it's fun to play around. :)

Also glad you enjoyed the smut! LOL, lots of fingering, and you know I can never resist dirty talk!

You're the best lovely, and this comment made me very happy! <3

[capitu]

GOD! I had almost forgotten how smoking hot this is. Teddy's words, god. . .

Then you'll fuck me, Jamie. Bend me over and shove that fat prick of yours inside my arse. Ride me until I'm mindless from it, until you fill me up with your come."

that dirty talking while he takes it. . .

"How 'bout you, Jamie? You like it? Like the way my arse feels so fucking tight around your cock? You going to come, Jamie? Going to fucking come in my arse?"

Brain-melting hot. I love this all over again!

[gracerene]

<33

Thanks, lovely!!

[torino10154]

Guh. *bites fist* Nnnggh! *dies* Yeah, that was wicked hot. Fantastic, Grace.

[gracerene]

Thanks so much! :D