;) LOL I'm watching Seunghyun's best moments :) lol so funny and adorable :)
I know, haha I told ya too, I'll try to write more angst, I feel so empty on that genre :) :D I don't think I wrote them that special, they're actually not bad.
For the angst part, I think you need to elaborate more? But writing-wise, I think you're pretty okay. The one thing that you could learn... Maybe writing in chronological order? Cause it's currently like you're jumping from one event to another randomly.
*nodding* yes yes, i totally see what you're saying. I'll try to pay more attention to those details and get better at them >< those are not connected to each other, i kinda wrote each alone~
ha ha yeah, you better give me my threesome or i'll get bitchy.
Anyways, I really do enjoy your drabbles a whole lot (^-')b They're always so...unexpected, thought-provoking, and overall entertaining! Always a good read! ^^
Re: this is still graceful_mind :)shawnlyndseyJanuary 22 2011, 17:32:35 UTC
Insanity or not, I love seeing what's going on in your mind!
Oneshot? YESSSSSSSSSSSS *jumps up and down excitedly*
And don't worry I do love everything that I've read that you've written! I don't read it if I don't enjoy it, but I really REALLY enjoy your stories! They're always so different than what I expect to get when I go to start reading a fanfic! Keep up the good work (^-')b
Re: this is still graceful_mind :)graceful_mindJanuary 22 2011, 18:43:15 UTC
hahahaha! Sometimes, it's not good, since I'm half of the time tired of thinking about school or my friends, you'd get lost inside my head, believe it!!! ^;^
I'm working on it and trying to make it sound nice and angsty a bit. not fully but slightly angsty.
>D like me, I can't finish something I don't enjoy, with everything I do, I have to enjoy it. :D Really? Are they that different? Thank god I don't sound repeated or dull! I hate when I can't express something directly with a story or anything.
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They're so angsty! Okay, I know you've told me but yeah!
And your writing is improving! I'm so proud of you! :)
I love the first one the best! XD
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I know, haha I told ya too,
I'll try to write more angst, I feel so empty on that genre :)
:D I don't think I wrote them that special, they're actually not bad.
xD threesomes, soft spot?
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But writing-wise, I think you're pretty okay.
The one thing that you could learn... Maybe writing in chronological order?
Cause it's currently like you're jumping from one event to another randomly.
Yeah, you know me and them threesomes...
XD
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I'll try to pay more attention to those details and get better at them
>< those are not connected to each other, i kinda wrote each alone~
ha ha yeah, you better give me my threesome or i'll get bitchy.
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My initial reaction:
"DON'T DIE ON ME!!!!!"
Poor babies! Why does love have to hurt?!? ;_;
Anyways, I really do enjoy your drabbles a whole lot (^-')b They're always so...unexpected, thought-provoking, and overall entertaining! Always a good read! ^^
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Oneshot? YESSSSSSSSSSSS *jumps up and down excitedly*
And don't worry I do love everything that I've read that you've written! I don't read it if I don't enjoy it, but I really REALLY enjoy your stories! They're always so different than what I expect to get when I go to start reading a fanfic! Keep up the good work (^-')b
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I'm working on it and trying to make it sound nice and angsty a bit. not fully but slightly angsty.
>D like me, I can't finish something I don't enjoy, with everything I do, I have to enjoy it.
:D Really? Are they that different? Thank god I don't sound repeated or dull! I hate when I can't express something directly with a story or anything.
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