hq!!: Romantic, isn't it?

Mar 23, 2013 19:30

Fandom: haikyuu!!
pairing: hinata/kageyama
content/warning: a lot of touching, really.
for deb, sorry deb.

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r: pg-13, f: hq!!, p: hinata/kageyama

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theotherdenise March 23 2013, 16:53:36 UTC
ahhh i like it!!! i love kageyama getting pissed off that hinata eats in bed haha that would totally happen ;u; and hinata strategically disarming kageyama before he can take control too uwu

it doesn't feel ooc so you don't have to worry about that!

(i'm sorry i'm not good at critique... like the only thing i would suggest is that you use either their family names or given names consistently, otherwise it might feel like it jumps about a bit?? that's the only thing i can think to suggest!)

i really liked it thank you sweetheart ♥

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graceful_mind March 23 2013, 18:05:25 UTC
hahahahaha thanksss i'm glad you liked it (after all, it is written for you so i'm over the clouds with priiiide)

oh, me and my laziness. I'll try to be consistent with the name calling. I think I prefer Shou and Tobio a lot better in typing... :D

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theotherdenise March 23 2013, 19:06:15 UTC
you're welcome my darling /kisses your face

aaand i'm gonna try to finish the hinatsukki fic for you tonight but if i don't i'll get on it after work tomorrow!!

haha omg i used to hate writing anything with murasakibara in because it was such a pain to type

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