ahhh i like it!!! i love kageyama getting pissed off that hinata eats in bed haha that would totally happen ;u; and hinata strategically disarming kageyama before he can take control too uwu
it doesn't feel ooc so you don't have to worry about that!
(i'm sorry i'm not good at critique... like the only thing i would suggest is that you use either their family names or given names consistently, otherwise it might feel like it jumps about a bit?? that's the only thing i can think to suggest!)
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it doesn't feel ooc so you don't have to worry about that!
(i'm sorry i'm not good at critique... like the only thing i would suggest is that you use either their family names or given names consistently, otherwise it might feel like it jumps about a bit?? that's the only thing i can think to suggest!)
i really liked it thank you sweetheart ♥
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oh, me and my laziness. I'll try to be consistent with the name calling. I think I prefer Shou and Tobio a lot better in typing... :D
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aaand i'm gonna try to finish the hinatsukki fic for you tonight but if i don't i'll get on it after work tomorrow!!
haha omg i used to hate writing anything with murasakibara in because it was such a pain to type
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