A Good, Old-Fashioned Lie (1/1)

[grace_fully]

sorry i'm doing this. it's for the sake of archiving x__x *ANAL*

A Good, Old-Fashioned Lie.
j2; 1400k; pg13
jensen cooks dinner, but it's not just dinner, and jared really hates that it's not just dinner.
originally posted here.

written for 13chapters' prompt @ the totally awesome txts from last night challenge, hosted by bekkis. the prompt was, (415): I don't

Comments

[grace_fully]

LOL this is amazing.

thank you so much. i am so glad you liked it!

[the_easyway]

i am commenting on this from underneath my desk, as my body has not returned to its normal state from the bubbling gooey mess in which this fic left it.

FUCK, DUDE. i know you're amazing upside down and inside out but, shit. THIS.

my favorite line shouldn't be much of a surprise: "It was fine. I just, am trying to figure out, what do we do now? I mean now that, you know. Our dicks have touched."

i only picked a favorite because "our dicks have touched" should be uttered everyday, somewhere in the world, for the rest of time.

but i digress.

this is amazing. i love them. i love you. you're perfect.

[grace_fully]

WHAAAAAT THE FUCK ARE YOU DOING, READING THIS, OMG. I CAN'T DECIDE IF I'M DOUCHED OUT.

i mean i love you, your are incredible, thank you so much, BUT OMGGGG.

[ranalore]

This is excellent. I love the strong sense of Jensen deciding to act on the attraction, even though it's a new thing for him and kind of freaks him out. That's such a rare thing in stories, and I especially love the contrast of it with Jared's instinctual willingness to let himself be swept away by his own attraction. It just makes for excellent tension in the piece, and makes the ending such a good pay-off.

[grace_fully]

what excellent thoughtful lovely feeback, omg i adore you! this so so great! i wrote this so quickly, i was sort of just hoping i was getting some substance in there. this is intensely reassuring. thank you so much for reading!

[macbyrne]

This just makes me want to cry and laugh, all at the same time; Jared is so miserable and hopeful and scared, and Jensen has no clue what he's doing, and I swear to God, that line of Jared's just about killed me: This doesn’t happen to people. Unrequited love generally stays unrequited. *sobs* So beautiful!!! Loved it!

[grace_fully]

oh my goodness thank you so much for this! i am so glad you liked it, omg based on something in my life that i really want to happen x____x LOL. sigh. unrequited love is only awesome when it becomes requited!

omg those boys
i am obsessed
with their love <3

[diabolical22]

Umm how did I miss this? I just. This is fantastic. The pinning, the uncertainty, the angst, the sexual tension, that fucking hot kiss - you like pushed all my buttons and totally nailed the pacing. So, in my head, I'm going to pretend that you somehow subconsciously wrote it for me ;)

<33333333

[grace_fully]

HAHA, that is so weird, because i totally did! it's for you, my dear!

thank you so much for AWESOME feedbacks, this is really great to hear. i'm so happy!