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_profiterole_ June 14 2009, 22:16:17 UTC
I love this story so much! <3

He brushed the tips of his fingers over the back of Spock's hand - accidentally, on his way to picking something up, and the Vulcan froze for a split second, his eyes darting to the point of contact.
Accidentally? ;-)

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igrab June 14 2009, 22:27:09 UTC
...haha, yeah right. ;D

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allbutwon June 14 2009, 22:18:22 UTC
I love this story so much. At first, I was thinking it would be good, but you know, something short, something with some totally non-Vulcan friends of Spock, but you are weaving such a gorgeous tale of Spock's past, and I find myself adoring the Vulcan Boys. I can't wait to see what happens next.

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igrab June 14 2009, 22:27:47 UTC
^^; i am very glad that they are liked. they seem to have arrived in my head fully-formed, with no intention of letting me go.

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stormalynda June 14 2009, 22:58:28 UTC
Another excellent chapter! I wasn't initially expecting this much backstory involving Spock's Vulcan friends, but I must say that I'm really enjoying it. I liked the scene with Kirk and Spock making breakfast for everyone, and (of course) the finger brushing.

Best line: Perhaps one day he would casually press his lips to the captain's own, just to see what his reaction would be, and then write it off as a cultural difference, with a slight smirk on his face. Spock, I think that's a fantastic idea.

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igrab June 14 2009, 23:06:28 UTC
that was where i was initially going with it; of course, plot seemed to sink its claws into me and i have a full outline, now.

|D I HIGHLY AGREE. perhaps in another fic. because that would be entertaining.

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renuki June 14 2009, 23:25:43 UTC
I can't decide who I want to snarl at more T'Pring, Gaan's mother, or Sean. but ouch at Sean...somewhat..

Accidentally, my butt.

oooh. I wonder what Dzharel did.

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igrab June 14 2009, 23:27:16 UTC
gaan's mother, probably. she's the one who's supposed to be a mature adult.

XDDDDDDDD. spock thought so. hurrhurr.

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renuki June 15 2009, 04:28:02 UTC
Okay! *snarls at Gaan's mother*

:D

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luna_moonsilver June 14 2009, 23:56:08 UTC
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT

I was all waiting for a new part to come up, and here it is! (Am reading this just before I go to sleep, so sorry if my incoherency shows :3)

My favourite thing at the moment is the way that Bones and Kirk seem so weird to Gaan and Dzharel XD Oh, and Spock getting all annoyed over Jim's past (because I'm *hoping* that leads to protectiveness)

Hehe, kitchen scenes and (accidental, suuuuuuuuure) hand touching's good, too :) :P

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igrab June 15 2009, 00:10:28 UTC
XD they've been around a lot of aliens before, but never quite these kind of ridiculous humans. (and yes, spock's protective instinct is already realigning. X3)

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