Comments | grabi_hands: Seeing is Believing (Spy/Pyro, NC-17)

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Seeing is Believing (Spy/Pyro, NC-17)

Jul 05, 2010 01:03

Spy/Pyro . 4,133 words . NC-17 . originally posted: 11.18.08 . the only real porn i've ever written

( It is possible to train the ears to do the work of the eyes. )

pairing: spy/pyro, rating: nc-17, fandom: team fortress 2, fanfiction

Comments 2

storylandqueen July 5 2010, 05:26:15 UTC

I really don't know what I'm supposed to tell you. It's mostly porn, and I honestly don't know how to judge it. It has parts where you skip and skim, but it mostly seems like Spy's attention jumping around. I don't know the characters, so I can't speak about characterization. As far as writing quality, you did a good job as always. There were a few parts that came across as delicious and almost poetic. My favorite part, however, is this

It was the smile of a person who had gotten past an ocean of pain, a galaxy of pain, an entire dimension of pain and hardship that most people would never understand... and come back out the other side.

Who doesn't love it when someone triumphs?

herbailiwick August 30 2011, 20:06:01 UTC

This was incredible. Within the first few paragraphs I new I had to add this to my personal list of favorite TF2 fics. I am a sucker for Pyro, and for this kind of vulnerability here in this fic. It was so sexy, and so touching, and oddly hopeful at the same time. Thanks so much for this.