Comments | grabi_hands: Marrow [Kirk/McCoy, Kirk/Spock, NC-17]

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Marrow [Kirk/McCoy, Kirk/Spock, NC-17]

Nov 04, 2009 00:15

Title: Marrow
Author: igrab
Pairing: Kirk/McCoy, with implied Kirk/Spock
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 941

( He's a passionate anomaly lancing through the stars, and you're just a little piece of a dry earth, caught up in his inevitable wake. )

pairing: kirk/mccoy, rating: nc-17, fandom: star trek, pairing: kirk/spock, fanfiction

Comments 36

withthepilot November 4 2009, 05:44:58 UTC

Whoosh. That ending packed a wallop. Really good stuff.

igrab November 4 2009, 06:50:25 UTC

thank you!

f_vikus November 4 2009, 05:46:25 UTC

This is amazing. The angst is palpable, and the possibility of this scenario occuring is so realistic. I love the clarity of the imagery, and the last line "because the scope of its world is so small that the hand seems like the very face of God," just struck me. What a great read.

igrab November 4 2009, 06:51:14 UTC

Thank you very much! I am so glad you enjoyed it.

shingo_the_pest November 4 2009, 05:56:54 UTC

GAH, it's angsty, and hopeless, and desperate.

igrab November 4 2009, 06:51:48 UTC

Oh yes, those lovely things that McCoy is all too capable of being.

jimpage363 November 4 2009, 05:56:58 UTC

WOW. The sheer, bitter self-knowledge in this act is amazing. And painfully heartbreaking.

igrab November 4 2009, 06:52:42 UTC

Thank you very much, I'm glad you... enjoyed? XD

roseandheather November 4 2009, 06:02:58 UTC

Wow. Um... thank you for reaching into all my secret, shameful memories and forming a story out of them.

'Scuse me. I'm gonna go cry now.

Well written. Very well written.

igrab November 4 2009, 06:53:16 UTC

Well then, your shameful secret memories are an awful lot like mine, sigh. ♥ And thank you!