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California Rain [Pinto, R]

Jul 05, 2009 20:07

Title: California Rain
Author: igrab
Pairing: Zach/Chris
Written For: trek_rpf_kink, for this prompt: I have a terrible need for a fic involving RAIN. Not sissy sprinkling rain, either, we're talking TORRENTIAL DOWNPOUR. Prefer Pinto; getting stuck in the rain accidentally, but you get bonus points if it's voluntary.
Rating: R
Word Count: 2,880
Notes: based on the ( Read more... )

rpf: star trek, pairing: chris/zach, rating: r, fanfiction

Comments 70

mizubyte July 6 2009, 03:30:06 UTC

ooooo pretty.

and I totally see Zach being the kind of person to drive with the windows down in the rain.

(i;ve done it, its FUN)

igrab July 6 2009, 03:55:02 UTC

dude, it so is. i love having my windows down in the rain.

iseijin_chan July 6 2009, 04:03:03 UTC

HI! Ninja-ing cos I got a totally the image of Chris saying "It's FUN" as Kirk...xD

mizubyte July 6 2009, 04:09:52 UTC

ha, now I did too. awesome

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igrab July 6 2009, 03:55:39 UTC

:DDDDDDD thank you!! i seem to be a sucker for rain D: *put everything on hold to write this*

smutjunkie July 6 2009, 03:57:38 UTC

Chris Pine, 22 years old, death by drowning in Los Angeles, California. Oh, it was hilarious.

This line stings and left a bad taste in my mouth.

"I'm Zach," he says, and his voice sounds like French chocolate, the kind you get in tins.

*wink*

I love this. All of this. There's something so great about an R rating. It means that nothing's gratuitous and much is left up to your imagination, and everyone comes away with something slightly different.

smutjunkie July 6 2009, 03:58:27 UTC

Ack in case it wasn't clear, the stinging and bad taste were good things! I meant that the bitterness was palpable.

igrab July 6 2009, 04:09:39 UTC

lol! thank you so very much ♥

I've only written one NC-17 piece in my life, and it's from Team Fortress fandom. I tend to be all up on the artsy, fuzzy-lens kind of sex when I'm writing.

I get so frustrated by R when I'm reading, though. lol.

smutjunkie July 6 2009, 04:13:22 UTC

Uhm. In case you haven't gathered from my fics, sexual frustration? Not always a bad thing in my book. Hey, to each her own.

I'm gonna go re-read this now :3.

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eyesofshinigami July 6 2009, 04:02:00 UTC

^___^ Surprisingly, this left me with a warm sort of fuzzy feeling. I really enjoyed it.

And the sex in the rain was AWESOME. I have a bit of a kink for that kind of thing, and you did it perfectly. I really liked this as an alternate way for them to have met in the first place. And like someone else said, I could totally see Zach being the type of person who would drive in the rain with the windows down. (I have also done that before. XD It's kind of fun.)

Nicely done. ♥

igrab July 6 2009, 04:10:17 UTC

And he'd probably film it, too. :D

Thank you!

iseijin_chan July 6 2009, 04:05:00 UTC

RAIN FIC! I LOVE RAIN FICS! You are my HERO!!...ine...heroine... \:D/

Also, the buildup through bantering was pretty much the best thing ever. And yes Chris, Zach does have a luscious voice, gorgeous eyes and awesome everything else.

<3

igrab July 6 2009, 04:11:01 UTC

as long as I'm not your heroin ;D

Buildup through banter is the bread and butter of Pinto. Nomnomnom.

iseijin_chan July 6 2009, 04:14:00 UTC

HA! Write more fic like this and you will be *nods*

True that. Yumz~ xD