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FIC: The Road Not Taken, Ch 23

Nov 05, 2010 00:00

Chapter 23

Title: "The Road Not Taken"

Rating: PG-13 probably.

Pairings: Claire/Elle, Claire/Gretchen

Summary: When Claire goes back in time to save Elle, her relationship with Gretchen is threatened.

Disclaimer: I do not own the television show "Heroes."

Note: Takes place after "Brave New World." The past takes place after "The Butterfly Effect." Thank ( Read more... )

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gpgurl50 November 6 2010, 00:35:23 UTC

Thanks for commenting. Yes, it's very important to me that Claire is not completely incompetent, just human. Haha.

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gpgurl50 November 6 2010, 00:32:27 UTC

Thanks! Elle never liked Gretchen anyway. Haha.

wgail November 8 2010, 01:11:15 UTC

Great job with storyline progression. All the loose ends are coming into play and Gretchen finally dumps Elle. Poor Elle, just wanting some attention and love from Claire. There seems to not be much time left in this time-line. I'm anxious to see what happens to keep the time-line intact. Rene/The Haitian seems to harbor a crush on Elle..I mean, who wouldn't :)

gpgurl50 November 8 2010, 01:30:29 UTC

Hey, I'm glad you like it. Yeah, things are winding up and are about to happen fast. I hope they do not feel rushed. I'm glad you didn't mind Rene's implied feelings for Elle. I realized that they're at least as close in age as Claire and Elle if not closer in age and who wouldn't have a crush on Elle really?