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[neigedens]

Title: Unknown Territories
Author: Briana Rose (briana_rose07)
Format and Word Count: One-shot, 1600 words
Rating: G
Summary: "Everyone is frightened of something," she said. "Brave people just know exactly what it is.” After the funeral Neville and Luna discuss their futures.
Author's Notes: I had prompt #5.

Comments

[kerrymdb]

I couldn't comment at your journal for some reason. So I'll comment here!

That's very interesting how you had Dumbledore's death affect Luna. I always thought she wouldn't grieve either, but for completely different reasons. I thought because of her quite confidence that she'll see her mother again in OotP, she knew Dumbledore's loved ones would see him again as well. But that's an unique character twist to have Luna view him larger than life.

"I have all this knowledge sitting in my brain but it’s not going anywhere. I have to tell somebody all of it.”I absolutely loved this line. This is so perfectly Luna

[neigedens]

Ok, I've posted it here as well. Thank you for the review and setting up the challenge and everything. :)

[lunafish]

I really like this story. The dialogue under the stars just strikes me as so real and intimate. Lovely.

[molly_coddles]

I like seeing Neville with such resolution and drive, and Luna pensive and observant.
Nicely done! :)