Comments | gotulloch: Nano Pono 10 of 11

gotulloch

Nano Pono 10 of 11

Feb 22, 2012 22:30

Disclaimer: Hawaii 5-0 and characters belong to CBS, I just wish I owned them. And if wishes were horses, beggars would ride.

Thank you my beta Traw for helping me keep on track. Any mistakes are still mine.

And the Winner Is?

Steve and Danny walked into the front lobby of Nihipali and McNeil to find a bit of a commotion. The office manager Maylea ( Read more... )

h50, genre gen, fanfic

Comments 4

simplyn2deep February 23 2012, 03:45:50 UTC

wow! I really wasn't expecting Gov. Stevens to turn like that. He had no right to question interrogate Steve and Danny like that. Now it's obvious why his nephew is the way he is.

gotulloch February 23 2012, 03:59:55 UTC

LOL. Yeah, I didn't expect it either until I wrote it. That's the way it goes sometimes, I think one way and the muse another.

sherry57 February 23 2012, 11:58:26 UTC

So Steve got the chance to put both uncle and nephew in their places!!! Great! And we got more great team and Steve/Danny work and good friendships. Thanks hon!

gotulloch February 23 2012, 23:02:14 UTC

You're welcome! Glad you liked it!