2 ficlets and a drabble for the Luau

[gottalovev]

I'm trying to get up to date with the lostsquee  luau, and regrouped 3 offerings in this post for less spam!

For ozmissage  who wanted the ladies of Lost to have some love too

Title: Nice Not Knowing You
Characters: Ana Lucia, (Desmond, Hurley)
Word count: 450 words, rated G
Summary: Ana Lucia didn't quite know why she had agreed to help three persons escape.

Comments

[cloudytea]

Yay, my first gift! Really, really love this! ♥_____♥

[gottalovev]

I'm really happy you liked it! yay!

I have to be honest, you probably could not have picked a harder challenge for me! but sometimes, doing something difficult is a nice exercise, so thank you!

[cloudytea]

Buahahah. I was a tad worried, too, because it's so specific, you know? Everything leading up to now has been a bit vague and free for all, but I wanted to see if anyone was up for the challenge and I'm so glad you didn't back down :D

[knopflergroupie]

Ooooh, I love stuff from the Hydra, this made me all nostalgic. I like that you can feel that Jack's at the end of his rope here. Thank you so much!!

[gottalovev]

he is, isn't he? *pets Jack*

I am so very glad you liked this! there's a lot of possible antagonism between characters on the show, and it's interesting to see how Jack and Juliet started from this to something totally different...

[ozmissage]

I love that you gave Ana an interesting reason for taking that money. I hated how the show brought her back only to be like hey look she's a dirty cop in wackadoodle heaven!

What you did here is so much more respectful to her character and incredibly moving. That last line about her son made me so teary.

And the way she's a bit put off by Hurley knowing her name was perfect. Thank you so much for this! <3

(Also that Jack/Juliet piece was crazy good too. GUH.)

[gottalovev]

oh, great, I am so happy you liked this. I've always liked Ana (I was in a minority at one point!), she had so much potential. It was nice to see her in the sideways, but I was a bit miffed at how she was a dirty cop too. I am so happy you like the way I portrayed her, here. I'd like to think that she found some of the things she always wanted in that reality, like her kid.

and thanks, glad you liked the Jack/Juliet too! =D

[luna481516]

What is this you say, revisiting a scene with a slightly different vibe? It was always that way, from the beginning. Didn't you see when he bends her over the table? ;)

I also liked the Ana piece with her own little sideways twist at the end.

[gottalovev]

LOL! yes, yes, I saw that, a very charged scene! that he got off on it a little bit is the only thing I added here ;)

thank you so much, I am happy you enjoyed!

[greedyslayer]

Finally she could get a house where the rugrat would have his own room, and maybe plan a trip to Disney World on top.

Punch to the gut.

And I'll admit, I actually rationalized Ana's return as an apparently dirty cop with the idea that she finally got the child she wanted, and she had to go to extreme measures to support her kid. So I'm really glad your drabble built up to that. XD

[gottalovev]

thank you, I am so glad the last line. and that's great that we had rationalized Ana's actions the same way! I'd love to know she had that kid, in the do over. poor Ana, she deserves a break of some kind.