Fic: Win-Win Situation, Lost (Miles/Naomi) NC-17

[gottalovev]

I’m a couple of days behind on the lostsquee  luau, though I have 2 ficlets (save from this one) to edit and something in the works for the other Queen I missed. Expect a bit of spam. But this one is long enough to merit its own entry, and it’s for the lovely valhalla37  who asked for tropes. I went with cuddling for warmth and even if I don’t have it per se on my schmoop_bingo

Comments

[ozmissage]

*fans self*

GUH. This is incredibly hot and so playful. I love how casual Miles and Naomi are about everything, it's exactly how I imagine they'd react in that kind of situation. Wonderful fic!

[gottalovev]

wOOt! I'm glad it worked! it was... well it has been like 4 years since I wrote explicit het porn (to post!), so I was a bit nervous. I am so happy the playfulness came through =D

thank you!

[aurilly]

Love it!!! I love how you wrote it as something kind of normal and fun. No angst, no drama, and Miles was such a guy. That is my favorite kind of fic and there isn't nearly enough of it out there. Naomi being so nonchalant about Miles getting a hard-on was great. I always thought she was pretty awesome, so it's great to see her get some love, especially from someone as epic as Miles. Loved this!!!

[gottalovev]

that is so nice to hear, thank you! yeah, I made this light because I didn't want to drown in angst even if Miles was a bit mortified, but i'm really happy that you found it (and Miles!) amusing. Naomi appeared to me as a no-nonsense girl, and it was fun to play with her =D

[valhalla37]

Heeeeeeeeeeeeee!

This is AMAZING; thank you so, so, SO much for such a fun, hot, sexy fic! :D

It’s been four days, now, and Miles hasn’t slept much; neither did his roommate - Naomi, how did that happen? - judging by the tossing and turning she does every night on her own cot. Miles would complain out loud, but frankly the chick scares him a bit and he doesn’t want to look like a wuss.

LOL! Amazing; seriously, just the perfect Miles' POV.

I LOVE Naomi taking charge, and her "seriously?" at Miles! Hah! So perfect and IC and exactly why, for as little screentime as they got together, why I love them so much together; their banter is so great, and they play off each other so well. This part too, I loved:

"You really think I’m hot?" Naomi asks.

Oh god, will she just shut up and go to sleep so he can die in peace?

Hee!

It swings so flawlessly between snarky to HOT (with a capital H) to adorable (love the ending!) and it's so, so great, just all of it. Thank you again, so, SO much, for this wonderful gift! :D

[gottalovev]

hurray! I am so happy you liked this! it basically blindsided me from nowhere, but it was so much fun to do =D

It's always fun to write Miles and that you tell me I got him ok tickles me pink! As for Naomi, I was a bit nervous but ecstatic you liked her too! yay!

thanks for telling me what worked for you, it made me grin so wide *squishes you*