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tehprincessj April 23 2009, 22:40:11 UTC
Commenting on dA!!!

Gah, I'm still trying to paint my Comedian pic. And I was hoping to have it done for JDM's birthday. Fail! Oh, well. I've promised myself I wouldn't even write anything new 'til it's finished. Just... want to make sure it's awesome, is all.

Anyway, I'm excited to see it colored! Great job!

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gothic_tampons April 23 2009, 22:44:52 UTC
I has seen it! And I bet it will be awesome, I still have to do something for JDM's B-day as well. >_>;;

Thank's, I like doing odd layout's and symbolism. :)

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holyheat April 23 2009, 23:03:30 UTC
Found this at watchdom. I love this, it's got a really strong emotional quality to it! I did a quick go over for some corrections to anatomy here: http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y59/preciouschizu/crit.jpg

I can't wait to see this finished. And I also have an unhealthy love of your icon. :D

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gothic_tampons April 23 2009, 23:09:18 UTC
Thank you so much. <3 Srsly that's the bets crit/ help I have ever gotten. :D

Hopefully I can fix the anatomy, Ink it and put that up, so if I cannot color it I can at least ask someone else to! xD;;

And thank you again! A friend of mine on WCM made it for me. Thise scene makes me sad, but his face makes me hot WHATSUPWITHTHAT? D:

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holyheat April 24 2009, 02:52:59 UTC
I'm glad I could help! I find it's easier to do visual crit than verbal crit with drawings because words can't quite show exactly what you mean.

It is hot! xD I think it's because it'd be Ror's "O"-face if you shooped in some red hair and freckles. Which someone needs to do.

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gothic_tampons April 24 2009, 15:35:39 UTC
<3 *Gives you a chug for the crit* :D Yeah, it it's a lot easier to show people! I wish I could, but sadly, I have no tablet. ;-; I kept the nose a little long thoguh cause I thought it looked nicer though...I dunno why. xD;;

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brancher April 24 2009, 02:28:45 UTC
I like the pose, with the head up, as if he's listening to a voice on the wind. Technically I can tell you're still learning, but so are we all. If you keep drawing, you'll get better and better. The proportions and anatomy aren't quite right. If you want to fix that, there are three things to do ( ... )

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brancher April 24 2009, 02:29:13 UTC
ps: you win an internet just for asking for crit.

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gothic_tampons April 24 2009, 02:41:43 UTC
Thanks so much hon, that really help's me out a lot!

*Gives you a complimentary free hug* <3

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rurouniidoru April 24 2009, 05:26:54 UTC
Well, I had every intent on leaving crit because I figure if I do it enough someone will eventually leave me some, but holyheat drew everything I was gonna say, so there goes that idea.

In the interest of helping out like everyone else, however, I will ask if you are familiar with the awesome cheatlike lazy-people's shortcuts to facial proportions? Because that's all I can think of to cite at this point

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gothic_tampons April 24 2009, 15:31:30 UTC
No I am not familliar. :o *Ussually just fudges her faces up a lot*

Hmm, you need some crit? Maybe I can help if you link to some entrys. ^_^

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lukeyloves April 24 2009, 05:59:35 UTC
That is pretty cool, I especially like the pattern of the arms/chest. The longer nose is also cooler/more stylistic

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gothic_tampons April 24 2009, 15:33:34 UTC
Thanks! I actually refferenced my action figure for that. yeah, dispite the Crit I ketp the longer nosen cause I lied it that way. xD (Sorry Visual crit oerson, I did all the anatomy thing's, I just REALLY liked the nose. xD;; )

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