Comments | goth_clark: Fiction: The Pull and the Push - Supernatural

goth_clark

Fiction: The Pull and the Push - Supernatural - R

Dec 11, 2009 13:38

Title: The Pull and the Push
Fandom: Supernatural
Pairing: Dean/Castiel
Rating: R
Category: AU, first time, angst.
Wordcount: 4,700
Notes: Written for the deancastiel AU/Fusion challenge. Religion Plays a Role Prompt 58. AU: Castiel as the priest losing his faith, and Dean the friend who finally causes him to fall into temptation. I would like to ( Read more... )

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Comments 48

denazia December 11 2009, 19:08:03 UTC

Fantastic. Very beautiful imagery. You treat these characters with such love and affection. When Dean whispers "I knew who you were" I got shivers. And I loved baby brother Adam. That was a nice touch.

goth_clark December 13 2009, 01:22:18 UTC

Thank you so much for this lovely comment.

quovadimus83 December 11 2009, 19:13:34 UTC

oh, I always liked Father Gregory. I can totally see him & Castiel being close. but that Dean! slutty young thing... :D

goth_clark December 13 2009, 01:58:17 UTC

I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. :D

heathyr_iltp December 11 2009, 19:32:46 UTC

Wow, I absolutely love your icon. Cas as a priest is so...weirdly hot.
:/ Now I feel quite dirty.

Lovely fic as well. So touching and I was as nervous for Cas as he seemed to be!

goth_clark December 13 2009, 14:59:46 UTC

Cas as a priest is so...weirdly hot.

I agree!

Thank you for the lovely feedback.

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goth_clark December 13 2009, 14:58:18 UTC

Thank you!

imora_mi_savur December 11 2009, 21:25:39 UTC

MMMMMMMMMM! you had me at the icon, (which I'd love to save/use btw with credit obv, but if you'd rather not thats fine) OMG Cas as priest *glomps... flails... iz ded*

I knew a good decade ago that I was a 'lapsed' catholic didn't realised how lapsed til I discovered SPN Dean/Cas priest porn. Until now it's all been one or both just dressed as a priest, but holy hot damn mother of all things sacreligious this went above and beyond. Awesome concept, I bow to to it honestly.

Thing is it's not just the concept, anyone can come up with a good plot, but you wrote it really well. The shift in timeline was seemless, the characters were symaphtetic, the sex was hot. It is just an awesome fic and I'm mem'ing the hell out of it.

Thanks for sharing, and BTW if I end up giggling at the hot new priest at my families church this midnight mass, I'm blaming you lol. just so you know.

goth_clark December 11 2009, 21:31:46 UTC

Thank you so much for this wonderful comment. You may use the icon!