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hadesgirl October 5 2009, 04:22:24 UTC
GUH!!!!!!! Oh this was SO sad, and very very poignant. I love the sparseness of Castiel's speech, very true to character.

Aaaagh, and even though Lucifer denies his request, Castiel still thanks him for his deliverance... THAT is really powerful.

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goth_clark October 5 2009, 12:04:42 UTC
Thank you for the lovely comment.

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xterm October 5 2009, 05:58:59 UTC
Castiel could feel the tears in his eyes. He was finally going home.

Good ending!

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goth_clark October 5 2009, 12:05:35 UTC
Thank you. The ending seemed to be the hardest part to write. I'm so glad you thought it was good.

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caz2y5 October 5 2009, 09:28:07 UTC
thats so beautiful. and asking him to make it painless for Dean so sweet and succinct.

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goth_clark October 5 2009, 12:04:01 UTC
Thank you.

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hils October 5 2009, 09:44:32 UTC
!!!!!!!!!

Dean/Castiel and Sam/Castiel in the same fic! I love you!

That so so sad and beautiful. Good job!

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goth_clark October 5 2009, 12:03:31 UTC
It's one of the hardest stories I've ever written for some reason. I'm not sure it achieved my intent. Thank you for the lovely comment. I seriously don't even read death fic so writing one was tough but I promised I'd challenge myself this year.

The next one will be happier. Maybe. :)

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outlawradio October 5 2009, 12:25:52 UTC
This is so sad and beautiful. I had the idea of a Castiel POV fic of this knocking around in my head too, but this is so perfect. The end is so heartbreaking!

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goth_clark October 5 2009, 14:12:18 UTC
Thank you.

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