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Fiction - Anticipation - R Clark/Lex

Sep 12, 2005 10:12

Title: Anticipation
Author: GothGirl
Rating: R
Challenge: Written for the CLFF 13 bad sex challenge.
Notes: Thanks to off_that_bridge for all her encouragement. Thanks to off_that_bridge, jfc013 and gothphyle for their beta. All remaining errors are mine. Spoilers for first season. Consider this fiction number one of the 22 I'll be writing for season five ( Read more... )

slash, clff, clex, fiction05

Comments 18

lucidity_0 September 13 2005, 19:07:17 UTC

*sigh* I love jealous Clark fics! :)

"What did you mean when you said 'I bottom'?"

Favorite line!! lol.

goth_clark September 13 2005, 20:59:25 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks so much for letting me know. :)

meret September 15 2005, 01:13:50 UTC

Awwww! This is wonderful! I especially love Clark's first time, and his pretending to know what bottoming was. I thought that was perfect! Terrific job! :)

goth_clark September 15 2005, 01:20:13 UTC

Thank you. I'm so happy you enjoyed the story. It was so nice to go back and write first season clex. They're all fresh and bursting with newness. :)

kitkat3979 September 24 2005, 07:51:14 UTC

Poor Clark!

I'm glad they finally cut through their issues and got together.

I loved seeing Lex keeping himself amused with visits from other men.

goth_clark November 17 2005, 01:25:10 UTC

Eep! Thanks so much for commenting. I must have missed this somehow.

I'm so glad you enjoyed the story.

danceswithgary December 14 2006, 23:25:16 UTC

Clark didn't want to interrupt, but he didn't want to eavesdrop either. That was rude and his mother had taught him better. He put on his most casual expression and smiled happily, and stepped through the open doorway, ready to act all surprised that Lex wasn't alone. He put on his most casual expression and smiled happily. Love how he chooses just how rude he can be and stay within his Mom's teachings!

Clark's heart was pounding in his chest over what had just happened. He just smiled brightly and bit his lip so he wouldn't blurt out how happy he was at the fact that this person from Lex's past had left as soon as Clark had arrived. Not jealous, much. :-P And then it happens with another one and another... poor Clark.

"I thought you wanted to be saved from your meeting with that guy," he blurted, eyes wide and concerned. He waited for Lex to look up at him to see if he bought this. When Lex finally did look up at him, he didn't look convinced. Clark tilted his head and smiled. "Was I wrong?" he asked as innocently as he could. I ( ... )

goth_clark December 15 2006, 14:22:47 UTC

I love clex where they are drawn to each other as well. Thanks for commenting. :D