Fiction: Love Under Will 1/3 - Supernatural - R

[goth_clark]

Title: Love Under Will

Comments

[mulder200]

Wow! What a beginning. I can't wait for the next part.

[goth_clark]

Thank you!

[amerikangothic]

(note: I am clearly slow this early in the morning and don't even know where I'm leaving comments...it goes here, right? Right. o_0 )

Awh, I love this...poor Dean, just coming to terms with his feelings only to have Castiel wrenched away...and I'm glad that you're dealing with the Jimmy factor, because that's always an interesting avenue to explore. I also like how you're taking your time to set things up...you've done a bang up job building the tension, and left the reader with this horrible need to know what happens next, coupled with the dread of what might happen next. I'm anxious and afraid for the characters, and that makes me read more. Looking forward to the next post!

[goth_clark]

Thank you so much for this lovely feedback.

[roxymissrose]

Excellent beginning--you made me laugh at the little routine in the kitchen and then cry for Dean, losing someone he cared for yet again. I'm looking forward to what comes next!

[goth_clark]

Thank you!

[roxymissrose]

you know, I have the feeling that you're about to do something really wicked to all those boys....

[goth_clark]

Thank you!

[fannishliss]

wow! I'm ready for this!

[goth_clark]

Thanks!