Comment fic meme #5

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I hope everyone isn't too busy with the porn battle for the post-exchange comment fic meme. As usual, I would very much appreciate if you could help spread the word about this meme on LJ or tumblr or wherever - the more people know about this, the more prompts and fills there are

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Victarion/Asha

[linndechir]

Victarion angsting about what Balon would do to him if he found out. Asha finds his angst pretty exasperating (and is really sick of hearing about her father in bed ;)).

Practicality, Victarion/Asha

[sternflammenden]

Bracing herself against the rough wood of the headboard, Asha lets out a sharp gasp as he enters her, thrusting against her from behind, hands gripping her waist so tightly that she knows that tomorrow she will find bruises in the shape of Victarion’s fingers decorating her body. From her position, she cannot see his face or the way that he clenches his teeth when he lies with her, but she can hear his breath hissing through his tight jaw, harsh with the effort and the sensation, and she can picture his face, a hard mask, more suitable to the battlefield than the bedroom. But Asha doesn’t mind. She’s not quite sure how this whole thing with her nuncle started and doesn’t really think about it much. Just that one day she was a niece, a girl who could heft an axe as well as any man on Pyke, and the next, she was a lover

Re: Practicality, Victarion/Asha

[linndechir]

This is so great, as always. :D I love how rough and raw and tense Victarion is. And hair-pulling, yesssssss. The Greyjoys just make for the best porn. Grumpy Victarion and trolling Asha. ^^

a bold hand reaching out to toy with his hair, unbound, lying tangled in his face, over his chest, covering the broad muscles that she loves to touch so well.
I love how Victarion's hair makes it into every fic because it's just that gorgeous and hot. And it's perfect that Asha only thinks of how inconvenient and dangerous it would be if Balon found out, but she doesn't really angst about it the way Victarion does. I love how you write these two. Thank you. <3

Re: Practicality, Victarion/Asha

[sternflammenden]

Thank you, and they are so much fun to write. Such a stress reliever, those Greyjoys. ;)

I had to put that hair thing in there, because I'm always having Balon do things with his brother's hair and even though Asha doesn't know what goes on, she's her father's daughter so...