I'll always be here (ONE SHOT)

Jan 13, 2009 21:36

Title: I'll always be here
Pairings: Onew and Key/ TaeMin and JongHyun
Rating: G
Length: One Shot
Warnings: The story may make you cry. :)
Genre: angst
A/N: This is a one shot(?) I wanna give it a try. So yah. That's it. :)
Summary: Key has a girlfriend named Eun Jung. He lives with his fellow band mates. Onew has deep feelings for Key, but Key doesn't ( Read more... )

drama, shinee, kami-no-kami, onew, minho, cami unni, love, jonghyun, forever more, taemin, key, onkey, fluff, angst

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kami_no_kami January 13 2009, 15:47:51 UTC
He did as asked(told) and sat on the chair next to Key.

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Key didn't understand what he did wrong. But He shook the thought of(off) and embraced Eun Jung.

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Key smiled at the thought(message) and changed

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"She may have left you, Key(,) But I'll always be here." Onew whispered to him as the wind blew the leaves around them

**** ATE CAMY'S COMMENT ****
This is a very adorable fic. I may not be used to OnKey & JongTae but---it's cute none the less. I love how you ended your oneshot. It's so sweet.

You made very few grammar errors & there are some mistakes in punctuation marks but it's nothing to panic over.

Continue to write~ :) Your Unni is here to help!

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gotcake101 January 13 2009, 15:59:31 UTC
TeeHee! ^^

Thanks for correcting my bad grammars unni!!!

*huggles you*

Thanks again.

I just wrote this during Language class.

=^^=

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gotcake101 January 13 2009, 16:02:06 UTC
Okay. I fixed it. :)

Thanks again unni!

*kisses unni on the cheek*

TeeHee! =^^=

Do you have any more YunJae cookies? xD

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kami_no_kami January 13 2009, 23:17:53 UTC
no problem, darling. Unni is always here to help you =)

*hands another yunjae cookie*

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kaizukix14 January 22 2009, 08:49:34 UTC
This fic is so cute♥♥♥
thanks for making this! OnKey is so ♥♥♥

oh, and i love this part:
"She may have left you, Key, But I'll always be here." Onew whispered to him as the wind blew the leaves around them.

♥♥♥

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gotcake101 January 22 2009, 11:53:36 UTC
No problem!

Thankshoo for commenting~

TeeHee^w^

I was very emotional that time. c:

Thanks again for reading! *huggles you*

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kaizukix14 January 22 2009, 13:02:23 UTC
welcome!

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xxarnxx May 11 2009, 23:10:37 UTC
awwwww, this was really cute :''D
key with women? i could never see that :o
im just happy Onew got what he wanted, and that was Key.
I think this is great for your first fic! keep going bby~!

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gotcake101 May 12 2009, 14:39:00 UTC
YAY! IKR? O.O UHUHUH! YAY! ILY!♥♥♥~ HWAITING!

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