Title: I'll always be here
Pairings: Onew and Key/ TaeMin and JongHyun
Rating: G
Length: One Shot
Warnings: The story may make you cry. :)
Genre: angst
A/N: This is a one shot(?) I wanna give it a try. So yah. That's it. :)
Summary: Key has a girlfriend named Eun Jung. He lives with his fellow band mates. Onew has deep feelings for Key, but Key doesn't
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Key didn't understand what he did wrong. But He shook the thought of(off) and embraced Eun Jung.
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Key smiled at the thought(message) and changed
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"She may have left you, Key(,) But I'll always be here." Onew whispered to him as the wind blew the leaves around them
**** ATE CAMY'S COMMENT ****
This is a very adorable fic. I may not be used to OnKey & JongTae but---it's cute none the less. I love how you ended your oneshot. It's so sweet.
You made very few grammar errors & there are some mistakes in punctuation marks but it's nothing to panic over.
Continue to write~ :) Your Unni is here to help!
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Thanks for correcting my bad grammars unni!!!
*huggles you*
Thanks again.
I just wrote this during Language class.
=^^=
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Thanks again unni!
*kisses unni on the cheek*
TeeHee! =^^=
Do you have any more YunJae cookies? xD
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*hands another yunjae cookie*
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thanks for making this! OnKey is so ♥♥♥
oh, and i love this part:
"She may have left you, Key, But I'll always be here." Onew whispered to him as the wind blew the leaves around them.
♥♥♥
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Thankshoo for commenting~
TeeHee^w^
I was very emotional that time. c:
Thanks again for reading! *huggles you*
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key with women? i could never see that :o
im just happy Onew got what he wanted, and that was Key.
I think this is great for your first fic! keep going bby~!
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