Sempiternal [for citrus_sarang]

Jan 06, 2015 09:23

For: citrus_sarang

Title: Sempiternal
Pairing(s)/focus: JB/JR
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 2,005
Warnings: blood, minor character death, mentions of war
Author's notes: To my recipient, thank you for the wonderful prompts! I had to cycle through the prompts because I had a hard time choosing, but I ultimately went with this one. I hope you enjoy! ^ o ^
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rating: pg-13, year: 2015, pairing: jb/jr.

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citrus_sarang January 6 2015, 15:06:49 UTC
OKAY I AM DEAD?

firstly, I absolutely forgot what I prompted but when I read the summary I was like THATS IT THATS MY PROMPT and fell into incoherency. And then I started reading ans was just????? ITS SO GREAT???? all the little things you put in about their previous lives and then the Yugyeom tidbit?? OK THE YUGYEOM MENTION GOT ME ROLLIN LIKE, NO PLS. but for real, as the story went on and how they didn't want to live forever even after they promised each other forever!!! that sent me overboard!!!! !!!

I really loved this and I'm sorry this comment is lacking I'm on mobile rn and its being a real butt BUT I loved this and thank you SO SO SO MUCH <3<3<3<3

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hyukbins January 8 2015, 02:07:06 UTC
i really liked how this vampire!au (can i call it like this ?) was written, as in differentlty from what i've seen so far *__* it was great and refreshing (?)

i simply love how they kept their promises of forever to each other

and when they thought back about their previous lives :((

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hipployta January 9 2015, 04:13:04 UTC
When forever became too much...they chose to end their forever together

Jaebum forgot but Jinyoung remembered

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shineeexo14 January 17 2015, 00:39:20 UTC
wow this was so well written i cant even explain
i didnt really understand the ending but now i get it.... its so sad
but all the details u put were so good and it fit really well with the story

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lunarblossom25 June 12 2016, 03:01:05 UTC
Fab

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