OH THE CHARACTERISATION IS BRILLIANT IT'S /PERFECT/ FROM JACKSON AND JAEBUM'S LIKE bullheadedness and dumb and then jinyoung's long suffering-ness and attitude of omg you are all idiots what i didn't say that ofc i didn't what r u talking about ur delusional that didn't happen i would never (shhh just go with it) and then like everyone else's characterisation too like mark's silent and yet fully present/teasing air and YUGYEOM COUGHING ON THE COUCH IT WAS SO GREAT THAT PART 'we've been caught' LIKE NO SHIT JAEBUM JUST IMAGINING THE SCENES IN MY HEAD WAS SO BRILLIANT YOU PAINTED EVERY PICTURE SO BRILLIANTLY THIS IS JUST WONDERFUL and like discussions about jinyoung's touchiness and jaebum being like 'he's not that touchy whatever i obviously have reason to be jealous (not)' and then them slowly falling into this and them getting caught by the members is great and-
This is much better than okay, it's great! I love it! :D You got everyone's characterisation down /perfectly/ and I really like that Jackson apologised as well for his contribution to his and Jaebum's collective foolishness.
This was the prompt I wanted filled the most, so I'm glad that this was the fic I ended up being gifted, but I'm also really interested to see which of my other prompts you were originally working on. :3
this is one of the best jackbum fics i've read (which aren't a lot - god, i need more jackbum fics in my life) your characterizations are so on point ;;;; i love everything, i like that you focus on jaebum's sort of inner struggle on accepting his feelings for jackson - and i love that you included jinyoung so much hsfjfkafkj thank you sooo much for this fic!
jaebum was so endearing too, being so insecure and all but oh man idk jackson was really nice too and their relationship was great even with the fights
BUT jinyoung and his book, giving advice out and then losing his temper with both of them lololol
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OH THE CHARACTERISATION IS BRILLIANT IT'S /PERFECT/ FROM JACKSON AND JAEBUM'S LIKE bullheadedness and dumb and then jinyoung's long suffering-ness and attitude of omg you are all idiots what i didn't say that ofc i didn't what r u talking about ur delusional that didn't happen i would never (shhh just go with it) and then like everyone else's characterisation too like mark's silent and yet fully present/teasing air and YUGYEOM COUGHING ON THE COUCH IT WAS SO GREAT THAT PART 'we've been caught' LIKE NO SHIT JAEBUM JUST IMAGINING THE SCENES IN MY HEAD WAS SO BRILLIANT YOU PAINTED EVERY PICTURE SO BRILLIANTLY THIS IS JUST WONDERFUL and like discussions about jinyoung's touchiness and jaebum being like 'he's not that touchy whatever i obviously have reason to be jealous (not)' and then them slowly falling into this and them getting caught by the members is great and-
i really really enjoyed this okay like really
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This was the prompt I wanted filled the most, so I'm glad that this was the fic I ended up being gifted, but I'm also really interested to see which of my other prompts you were originally working on. :3
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Cute
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your characterizations are so on point ;;;; i love everything, i like that you focus on jaebum's sort of inner struggle on accepting his feelings for jackson - and i love that you included jinyoung so much hsfjfkafkj
thank you sooo much for this fic!
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jaebum was so endearing too, being so insecure and all but oh man idk jackson was really nice too and their relationship was great even with the fights
BUT jinyoung and his book, giving advice out and then losing his temper with both of them lololol
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