the defusing of a bomb [for EVERYONE]

[hot7]

For: EVERYONE ♡

Title: the defusing of a bomb
Pairing(s)/focus: Jaebum/Jinyoung/Jackson/Mark (implied)
Rating: PG
Word count: 3.5k
Warnings: none
Author's notes:- First off, I’d like to apologise for the obvious lack of quality in this ;; Originally I had a completely different plot in mind, but Major Writers Block had me skirting around and re-

Comments

[quotidianue]

I actually didn't realise how negative my A/N was until a lot later, oops ;;; I think I was just so worried and frazzled at the time

Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Haha, to be honest everything else I've written I'm not the proudest of either, it's been a while since I've updated my LJ with anything recent ...

Thanks for commenting <3

[nekokonneko]

Why so negative, OP? I really like how this turned out :) I loved how you had Jinyoung, Jackson and Mark comfort Jaebum and help him through one of his rages in their own way. This is a great character piece for Jaebum, and I'd be really interested to see what you'd churn out with some extra time.

[quotidianue]

I was super worried over this, but I'm glad that you enjoyed it!

I wish I could've explored the relationship the four had in the way I had originally planned, but alas ;; Thank you so much for commenting, and I'm happy you liked it! ^^

[anonymous]

Demon Trainee turned Demon Artist JB. He’s heard the rumours, and he’s sure they have too.
Broke my heart.

I really liked the contrast between Jinyoung's warm-one-word-one-touch comforts, Jackson's loud - yet affectionate - chattering, and Mark's one sentence words of encouragement. Even though each member's way of comforting was different, it still helped Jaebum. The small mentions of Bambam and his fearlessness were great ^^

I loved the last part, really heartwarming ending!

[quotidianue]

Ah anon, you deciphered what I was trying to say exactly to the T ! Haha yes, Bambam snuck his way in there and i couldn't get him back out ..........

Thank you so much <3

[hyukbins]

my heart was aching at some point but surprisingly it wasn't a bad kind of aching, if that makes any sense lol

jinyoung comforting jaebum though, rip me and jackson being his loud endearing self ^v^ and ofc fearless bambam along with silent but supportive mark

i really like your writing :D it was great to read it from beginning to end without pausing, it gives out a nice flow, does it make sense? yes? no? anyway, the fic was great and i really liked how jaebum's emotions and fears were put OvO

[quotidianue]

I think I know the feel, haha!

Oh, thank you so much! That's a super wonderful compliment, and I"m glad you enjoyed it. I'm still a little torn on how it turned out in the end, but it makes me relieved to know people enjoyed it ;;

[hipployta]

Hyung Line's relationship is endearing

Considering the stories about Jaebum's temper it only makes sense that Jinyoung, and later the other members, are aware of it and learned how to deal

[quotidianue]

Yes, to be honest I haven't seen much of any trace of JB's //genuine// anger thus far so it was a lot of artistic liberty on my part.

Still though, it's clear that they're all pretty tight-knit (now, at least-) so-!

Thanks for commenting <3