and if you're homesick, give me your hand and i'll hold it [for preorder]

[hot7]

For: preorder

Title: and if you're homesick, give me your hand and i'll hold it
Pairing(s)/focus: Jackson/Jinyoung; side Mark/Yugyeom
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 8074
Warnings: Some swearing and mild underage drinking.
Author's Note: To preorder: I hope this fits some of your expectations; I didn't really get the chaebol angle in so I'm sorry about that

Comments

[hipployta]

Hyung line focus with the appearance of maknae line was already great but Jackson continously teasing their sexual tension until Jinyoung said, "F It," did something about it...greatness

[chanyeolanda]

thank you so very much, i'm glad you enjoyed it!

[preorder]

omg anon I screamed a little when I saw this posted >//< thank you so much for writing this!! and the pairings too!!!! jinson is one of my fave pairings, and the inclusion of mark/yugy makes this even better!! the way you write the jackson/jinyoung relationship is sooo satisfying, I LOVE the push-and-pull, and friendly cuddling is one of my fave things about got7 in general!! like this line was so cute! His bed dipped under extra weight, Jackson's arm lying heavy on his waist as he felt him nuzzle his face into Jinyoung's back. in general their teasing flirtation is adorable, like the 'Are you saying I have a nice ass?' / 'Firm and bouncy,' exchange omg. I screamed. perfect jinson, ass-touching all around. jb and mark leading them to the truth is sooo great, and I seriously loved this line: 'You're kind of adorable in the right lighting on a good day,' he told him WHAT AN ASSHOLE DIG but also what a great summation of their dynamic, my face is seriously like 😊😊😊 rn. oh man the scene where jackson comes to cuddle bc he's homesick...

[chanyeolanda]

WHY ARE YOU SAYING SORRY I KEEP COMING BACK TO READ THIS REVIEW IT'S SO WONDERFUL thank you so very much for everything you said and i am SO GLAD you enjoyed it

[anonymous]

the last line is GOLDEN; i have been rereading the last part over and over again just to relish in its greatness. ugh jinson is the most fun got7 pairing to me and you had me doing that jackson arm flaily thing he does with how much fun your jinson have (OVERDRAMATIC STEALTH!! being disappointed with mark's lack of reaction when they teased him in the towel scene! highly likely accidentally on purpose sexts! comforting cuddles while reading erotica! jackson just generally bringing out the Bro in our resident pseudo intellectual!). anyway i enjoyed it yes

[chanyeolanda]

lmao i'm glad you enjoyed that line it's one of my favourites. jinson are fun aren't they omg thank you so much i'm glad you liked their dynamics (they would be disappointed with a lack of reaction in my opinion also the sexts well there was a deleted scene in which jinyoung texted mark and asked him to hit jackson for him and when mark asked why (his replies went 'ok' 'why') jinyoung forwarded the text and mark was like 'wow um i'm flattered but i don't like you like that' and jinyoung's like 'fuck off no jackson sent me that' and mark's like 'shit srsly' and jinyoung's like 'by accident her number was right under mine but now he's being all jackson about it' and mark's like 'oh is that what he said' but i felt that would be too obvious re jackson's feeling so tl;dr on jackson's side the sext was alcohol fuelled but very much meant for jinyoung but jb really did steal jinyoung's phone to reply. )

thank you so very much for you enthusiastic and generally wonderful comment lmao

[chanyeolanda]

i feel like everyone felt deprived of jinson and used this exchange as a countermeasure lmfao

thank you so much; friendships are really important to me so i'm glad that i'm able to write that so thank you

thank you so much for your comment and i'm glad you enjoyed it!

[hyukbins]

i loved everything about this story, the way you wrote about their antics and how enjoyable your writing style is!!!

the ending got me grinning AND laughing extra hard (because lbr this whole fic has amazing humor)

[chanyeolanda]

thank you so much! i love to make people laugh so i'm glad to hear it fulfilled that purpose lmao i'm so glad you enjoyed it and thank you again for taking the time to comment!