I'm not that familiar with her canon (AAAAAAAAAA), but I would love to see her around more. While I don't know much about what she sounds like in her canon, she does seem to have a pretty strong voice here at least. I actually find her a really interesting character so far.
Re: HuntressmeowminxFebruary 15 2009, 23:45:51 UTC
I'm liking her so far. She didn't have a WHOLE lot of screen time, but enough that I can tell you've got a decent grasp of the voice. And I can hear Amy Acker at times reading your posts. I do think activity will be key for her, since she was never really a character who sat idly by.
Okay Tabby. I still have a hard time being able to come up with some genuine crit here mainly because you have Nextwave!Tabby meshed into the world of X-Force!Tabby...and frankly Warren Ellis did a WONDERFUL (read: sarcasm) job of keeping Tabby as Tabby in Nextwave so its... different.
BUT! You work with what you got, and for that I give you tons of cred. She's got that psychobabble valley girl thing down pat, loves to have her fun, and generally gets along with people well. If anything I COULD point out though would be that maybe she is a bit too flirty? Tabby never came off as a flirt to me and especially since she used to be a hooker, that sort of behaviour was always kind of difficult for her? But maybe just a little less of that and maybe a little more of that hotheadedness that she's famous for? You got that playful prankster bit of her down, but I haven't seen too much of that Tabby that's a genuine threat who's not afraid to show it. I know there probably haven't been too many proper instances for you to show that, but she is
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I'm going to second what Kris said and add that even though you're very good at portraying her air-headedness, from what I remember from Nextwave, she came off as a bit of a self-absorbed bitch. XD Granted, ALL of the characters in Nextwave were unlikeable to some extent, but I'd love to see a bit more of her darker, anti-social side come out.
In other words, SHE NEEDS TO HANG OUT WITH MK MORE AMIRITE. B|
aasfkj I literally stared at the comment box for like ten minutes trying to figure out something proper to say, WHICH I TOTALLY CAN'T. So-- this is totally biased, but I love Mama. 8V ♥
I think he's a great character, and I can't really think of any crit right now (and I may possibly never come up with any). I love the way he looks after the younger superheroes, and I like how you deal with things like him missing MJ, etc.
Re: Peter Parker / Spider-Manxf_shatterstarFebruary 15 2009, 21:23:26 UTC
I don't have good crit because I SUCK, but I just wanted to say how much I adore your Spider-Man...because I don't believe I've gotten the chance to tell you. :/ You've got an amazing balance between the skilled, intelligent crusader, and the dorky, joke babbling good guy who's taking care of all the kids. And with the massive canon you've got to work with, I think you're doing an amazing job. So just...keep up the good work. :]
AHAHAHAHA NAMOR. ♥ He is such a pompous poo-face, but somehow it really works for him. I really enjoy him in combination with other characters-- especially Bucky-- and I was glad that Team Initiative had a chance to log with him some.
Hurgggh I don't really know his canon like at all, but I think he has a great voice and YEAH WHAT IS CRIT? 8V
The whole scene with him blocking traffic for like an hour before giving a speech to Hodge made me laugh my ass off. It sounds TOTALLY like something he'd do.
I don't know anything about his canon, but he absolutely matches the vague impressions I've absorbed of him by osmosis. ALSO he is... entertaining and regal and a jackass, and I'm eternally grateful for Bucky because his presence really lets Namor show his less jackassy side.
Obviously, he shows it with Diana as well, but that's different. WHICH IS ANOTHER THING - I love that he maintains coherence in the face of his various personality sides - it makes him more... human, I don't know if this makes sense.
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BUT! You work with what you got, and for that I give you tons of cred. She's got that psychobabble valley girl thing down pat, loves to have her fun, and generally gets along with people well. If anything I COULD point out though would be that maybe she is a bit too flirty? Tabby never came off as a flirt to me and especially since she used to be a hooker, that sort of behaviour was always kind of difficult for her? But maybe just a little less of that and maybe a little more of that hotheadedness that she's famous for? You got that playful prankster bit of her down, but I haven't seen too much of that Tabby that's a genuine threat who's not afraid to show it. I know there probably haven't been too many proper instances for you to show that, but she is ( ... )
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...er, although, I dunno how Uther 'Captain of the B| Brigade' Doul will deal with her, but that's not the issue.
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In other words, SHE NEEDS TO HANG OUT WITH MK MORE AMIRITE. B|
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I think he's a great character, and I can't really think of any crit right now (and I may possibly never come up with any). I love the way he looks after the younger superheroes, and I like how you deal with things like him missing MJ, etc.
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Hurgggh I don't really know his canon like at all, but I think he has a great voice and YEAH WHAT IS CRIT? 8V
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Keep doing what you're doing, man. :D
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Obviously, he shows it with Diana as well, but that's different. WHICH IS ANOTHER THING - I love that he maintains coherence in the face of his various personality sides - it makes him more... human, I don't know if this makes sense.
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