Rayne Fic: Worthy

[fairandbright]

Title: Worthy
Author: nutmeg610
Rating: R
Fandom: Firefly
Pairing(s): River/Jayne
Prompt: “I have been a selfish being all my life, in practice, though not in principle. As a child I was taught what was right, but I was not taught to correct my temper. I was given good principles, but left to follow them in pride and conceit…By you, I was properly

Comments

[lita64]

:D

That was great. I loved it! Beautifully written.

Jayne's like a lot of other men in that sense. They always think they know what they're doing, lol. That's where we have to come in and show 'em what's what! *sigh* Silly, silly boys. :)

"I'm a damn fine pleaser."

Yeah, he is! ;)

[fairandbright]

Thank you muchly! He's just like a little boy who wants his C+ paper displayed on the fridge. ;)

[toxic_corn]

Eeeeee! \0/ Over-confident Jayne being shown the error of his ways. *thumbs up*

[fairandbright]

EEEEEE! *flails* *glomps* Thanks!

[bugchicklv]

Hee! As much as I love Jayne, all the fics where he's a god in bed were starting to wear on me (I think that's why I finally broke down and wrote one).

So YAY! for more Unperfect Sex!

Also, GREAT last line.

[fairandbright]

Thank you muchly! Frankly, at his age, he's bound to not bat a hundred ifyouknowwhatimean. ;)

[romanceguru]

For me?! : D

Oh my, how I loved this!

"So become worthy of me." she whispered to him in the dim light“.

*keels over*

This redefines second chances. I love how he went after her after he realized the error of his ways, and your River was just perfect, adorable.

[fairandbright]

*squee* Thanks so much! :D

[karanina]

I second the YAY for imperfect sex!!! Jayne is SO lucky he has River to point these things out! I loved this!

[fairandbright]

Seriously! She's willing to give him another go. :) Thank you!