Comments | gorengal: For the costume challenge at <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/lawandorder100">lawandorder100</a></strong>

gorengal

For the costume challenge at lawandorder100

Nov 01, 2011 02:12

Title: Evil Unrelenting in its Pursuits
Flavor: CI
Rating: PG-13
Count: 100

She shed the fat suit and groaned at the relief from the heavy weight. Then she pulled off the curly salt-and-pepper wig and pulled at the short rubber nose gummed to her skin. She kicked off the size 13 loafers and collapsed in her bed.

Her head against the pillow, she went ( Read more... )

writing, tv: ci, my fic, character: alex eames, character: bobby goren

Comments 29

ladyjudithanne November 1 2011, 07:49:39 UTC

WOW!!!This was good writing..
I have written two stories 'killing them both off' They are on FaceBook. I've also done two 'ship' stories. They are on F/B.

gorengal November 1 2011, 08:08:55 UTC

Oh, thank you so much. I hate killing them off! I'm not really on Facebook or I'd read your stories.

Thanks again for the positive feedback...much appreciated.

ladyjudithanne November 1 2011, 08:23:24 UTC

PM. me with your email address and I'll send them to you.I know you did'nt like 'THEIR STORY' so don't worry I won't send that. I have finished it. 271 EPs. altogether.I enjoyed writing it and it was well recieved.
I also wrote another .BOBBY and LISA' and that was enjoyed too. It only had 30 EPs.
I am writing 'BOBBY and LISA' part two but it's just mainly for my own bit of fun.I have a few people who like my writing so I send them the EPs. as I do them. But now with Bobby gone peole are moving on and finding other interests so once I've finished part two that will be then end of my writing.

gorengal November 4 2011, 07:58:24 UTC

I noticed you deleted a comment with a link to the stories. Thanks anyway.

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havers November 1 2011, 09:18:14 UTC

OMG NOOOOOOOOO

What creepy story: perfect for Halloween.

gorengal November 4 2011, 07:58:39 UTC

Eeeeeek! Thank you. :)

redwingx November 1 2011, 18:29:55 UTC

Great scott! Evil! I'm going to be in the camp that Eames survived and now has to somehow help clear Goren. Oh the wonderful angst! ;)

Spectacular job on this!

gorengal November 4 2011, 08:00:29 UTC

I totally heard Doc Brown's voice when reading your comment! :) You know, I originally pictured Eames as being killed, but decided to leave it open to interpretation (which is why I didn't have a character death warning). Nicole creeps me out big time!

Thank you!

basric November 1 2011, 18:45:48 UTC

That was chilling. Well done.

gorengal November 4 2011, 08:00:56 UTC

Thank you! Perfect blood-red icon for this comment!

basric November 4 2011, 19:30:00 UTC

(= do you recognize Havers handiwork there?

ladydayelle November 1 2011, 18:54:30 UTC

Oh heck...It just makes me miss Nicole that much more...

gorengal November 4 2011, 08:01:25 UTC

*shudder* That's one person I don't miss! But I'm glad you enjoyed the story. :)

ladydayelle November 8 2011, 01:55:15 UTC

To be sure, she's the bad guy, but you couldn't help but root for Nicole a little. She was fun and having so much fun being the female Moriarty. Admittedly I love who I think is her UK counterpart, the character Alice on the series, Luther a bit more because they get away with being even more demented (stupid American network broadcast censors and advertisers).