fic: sirens bleed through my windowsill (liam/zayn)

[gooseberrie]

sirens bleed through my windowsill | pg-13 | liam/zayn | 1,852 | and i think just maybe, darling, you've got me - or, two souls against the backdrop of the bright bright lights | basically just me projecting my love for three beautiful cities onto the boys; and the fact that my ridiculous romanticism had me caught on the idea of them finding each

Comments

[las109]

I am at an absolute loss for words. Seriously. I read this a few hours ago, and then I just read it again a second time, and I've spent the last 10 minutes trying to figure out how to respond to this because nothing coherent comes to mind, and it deserves a more eloquent/thoughtful response than just "this may be the most gorgeous thing I've ever read" or "I loved this so much", though both statements are true

[gooseberrie]

thank YOU so much - i'm thrilled that you enjoyed it so much! i'm especially glad to have the positive feedback on the new york section, as that is the one i was shakiest on, seeing as i don't know the city as well, being a london girl. i'm so happy you felt that it was realistic! and i definitely will continue to write in the future - i have written for other fandoms, a long time ago, but yes, the long and short of it is that i'm certainly going to be writing more. thank you again for the feedback, it means the world to me <3

[violentfires]

this is beautifully written and dreamlike and full of wonder. as much a love story about living in a city as it was about two fictional boys. i adore this so deeply.

thank you so much.

[gooseberrie]

thank you, i'm SO glad you enjoyed it <3

[together4never]

This is so lovely and I agree, it's definitely as much a story about Liam and Zayn as it is about falling in love with three distinct cities and all they have to offer. So beautifully written. Thank you!

[gooseberrie]

thank YOU! it makes me so happy to know people actually like what i have to say! :)

[berusama]

i can't really express my awe for your writing style and the way you've turned these words into little snow globes, where everything is calm and muted and happiness drifts around like fake snow... or, well, i can't express my awe without using weird metaphors. dunno where that came from.

so what i will express instead is my appreciation for the actual content of what you've done here. if there is one trope/concept/whatever that i love more than any other, it's the idea that two people might be each other's constant in any universe. that, no matter what, they will find each other and love each other with their entire being. because it's not about being perfect for each other, it's about being perfect with each other and the universe knows that and will always find a way to bring them together, and damn, i just love that shit. so thank you for writing this and sharing this and being amazing at what you do. just, thank you.

[gooseberrie]

thank you! and yeah, absolutely same here about the idea of two people finding each other anywhere/everywhere, it's amazing to me. i'm so glad you enjoyed <3

[ellekinss]

this is so poetic and wonderful and you have grasp on language that i can only envy from afar because this was stunning and any english teachers wet dream and i'm sorry for such an ugly image on your beautiful story but wow

just wow

[gooseberrie]

aah thank you! i'm so happy to know you liked it, honestly :)