Blood Upon His Breast/chapter 5

[goodxnight]

Title: Blood Upon His Breast [ch.5]
Pairing: Brian Haner / Zack Baker. Avenged Sevenfold.
Rating: NC-17.
Summary: Brian's high school career is about to go to hell.
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. All events, characters, names, and places featured here are either the product of the author’s imagination, or are used fictitiously. Any

Comments

[queenofhunter93]

o_0

woooow... i'm... speechless.

zack's so forward, i love it ;)

amazing! my favorite chapter to date, b'cos of the smut, of course. lol.

[carcrashbeauty]

I'm genuinely worried about Jimmy :S hopefully Zack didn't do anything to him...
and this was prolly the first time I've ever read such an...encounter from the 'victim's' point of view. I think you did a pretty darn good job!

[ominousgrey]

This is just epically full of deliciousness (that's a good thing, don't worry). Did I mention how happy I am that you're writing again? You're my favourite fanfic author >.

[shriekandscream]

Jimmy being gone is scaring me, well, more worrying than scared. -___- Is he gonna wind up dead?
Zack sure had a burst of confidence. During that whole thing, he still gave me those weird vibes. It's getting insane, the way your writing makes me Zack-paranoid. I really wanna know what he's up to.

[goodxnight]

Jimmy doesn't die!

I don't particularly like death of main characters unless it needs to be done. As of right now, there is no foreseeable A7x deaths.

[shriekandscream]

Gooooood! :D
Alright, good. Seriously, I'm glad. That'd just suck. >.>

[nxt2beast667]

Damn that was so intense it made me almost speechless.

I also agree with the window bit being sneaky cause you had to wonder what came and paid Brian a little visit.

The part at the end was hot and very animalistic cause it felt like sex stripped down to its barest form. I love the big about what big eyes you have cause damn I like the idea of Zacky being the big bad wolf.