Comments | goodisrelative: Mentalist Fic: Nothing Changes, Days Go By, PG

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Mentalist Fic: Nothing Changes, Days Go By, PG

Feb 19, 2009 21:31

Title: Nothing Changes, Days Go By
Author: goodisrelative
Rating: PG-13
Characters/Pairing: Patrick Jane, Heather (episode character) / none
Spoilers: Scarlett Fever
Summary: He wears the mask of a human well.

Author’s Note: Thanks to pixie_on_acid for betaing! We both found a new fandom to love! The title is a line from Godsmack’s song Serenity.

( Nothing Changes, Days Go By )

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Comments 11

afteriwake February 20 2009, 03:05:33 UTC

This was very good. I like to think that this was exactly what that scene must have been like from her POV.

goodisrelative February 20 2009, 18:15:25 UTC

Thanks!

It was just telling to me that he waited until Lisbon left and looked around before asking Heather. And she would recognize *why* he asked.

persiflage_1 February 20 2009, 06:19:25 UTC

Interesting take on the scene.

goodisrelative February 20 2009, 18:17:25 UTC

Thanks!

bets_cyn February 21 2009, 00:52:15 UTC

:-)
Very nice

goodisrelative February 21 2009, 02:44:09 UTC

thanks twin.

nancye_2000 March 15 2009, 05:01:34 UTC

I liked it! I've seen a couple of times how Jane relates to the cases and thinks about his plans, which to me is disturbing because I just love him!
Good take on that scene!

goodisrelative March 15 2009, 15:20:48 UTC

Thanks!
Yes, there are definite times where his need for vengeance comes through. And it's in stark contrast to his more happy-go-lucky act that is seen 90% of the time.

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goodisrelative June 23 2009, 12:35:46 UTC

Thanks! This scene just had so much more going on than was portrayed, at least to me.