Comments | gonewithoutjam: Owned by AJ (SW, Qui/Obi, R)

gonewithoutjam

Owned by AJ (SW, Qui/Obi, R)

Apr 21, 2006 13:53

Title: Owned
Written by: AJ
Genre/Universe: Slash. First time. SW Pre-TPM.
Rating: Hard R to NC-17
Pairing(s): Qui/Obi
Word count: 100
Warning(s): Sexually explicit
Disclaimer: The characters depicted herein are featured in the Star Wars universe, and are the property of Lucasfilm, George Lucas and the various creators of the Star Wars Extended ( Read more... )

fps, drabble, star wars, qui/obi

Comments 10

elthegeneral April 21 2006, 15:27:00 UTC

Mmmm! And the pillows under his hips were a cute and sexy touch! Thank you!

gonewithoutjam April 21 2006, 19:03:27 UTC

Thanks :-)

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gonewithoutjam April 21 2006, 18:58:48 UTC

*blushes* thanks.

jane_sehrn_ta April 21 2006, 16:55:11 UTC

Hot yet quite edgy too... is Obi-Wan really enjoying this, or is it "what's expected"? Thought provoking stuff... well done.

gonewithoutjam April 21 2006, 19:02:01 UTC

It's interesting you should ask that, because I pictured him as very focussed on getting what he wanted and much less focussed on how good it actually felt. Anxious to please, possibly. But I love when someone reads what I've written in a different way.

a_blue_moon_cat April 21 2006, 22:53:49 UTC

Whoa! That's rather intense and very good. :)

gonewithoutjam April 22 2006, 09:29:20 UTC

Thanks :)

clara_posts April 22 2006, 06:58:15 UTC

Nice. Love the intensity of the description and Obi-Wan's focus.

gonewithoutjam April 22 2006, 09:30:37 UTC

Thank you. It's nice to get so much good feedback.

clara_posts April 22 2006, 09:50:21 UTC

It is nice... and Laura and I are thrilled to see the community so active again and to see new people contributing drabbles. It's all good.