Unfinished Business

Apr 16, 2009 18:07

Changmin-ah sits on the bench in the police office just staring outside. He watches all the people pass by. Children and their parents. Groups of teenage girls and the pervert man who follows them. And couples. Changmin growls when he sees them. Growls when his heart won’t stop aching. He can still see Yoochun’s lifeless body.

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yunho, series: remedy, yoomin, fanfiction, kangin, eeteuk, chaptered, yoochun, changmin

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gompi April 16 2009, 22:19:18 UTC
Spots for lady-shira32 and krisooh

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euphor_ia April 17 2009, 09:11:55 UTC
Oh Oh BaBy - I just got back from work.
ZOOOOOOOOOOOMG 0.o BRB <3

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gompi April 17 2009, 09:56:03 UTC
Enjoy (:

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krisooh April 17 2009, 18:16:48 UTC
AW BaBy cakes!
:) <3

I know you told me that Yoochun comes back to life. But I dont know why I thought Changmin was imagining Yoochun in the shower 0.o

But ahhhh! It ended so well. :) I'm happy. Can't waiiiiiiit for your next story *giggles

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gompi April 16 2009, 22:26:37 UTC
(; enjoy

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gompi April 16 2009, 22:32:46 UTC
Yes I suckered everyone

Yes yoochun's good at cleaning.

You know they need a womanly touch XD

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lady_akira April 16 2009, 22:25:33 UTC
oh.

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gompi April 16 2009, 22:26:53 UTC
yes the ending T.T

it's over

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lady_akira April 16 2009, 22:27:15 UTC
the shower scene was so sweet. and happy ending! i'm happy for your first series ever because it was good. *hugs*

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gompi April 16 2009, 22:32:03 UTC
haha Thank you

*hugs back* (:

I'm a hopeless romantic their had to be some type of happy ending :D

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bloodygenerals April 16 2009, 22:48:34 UTC
I knew you wouldn't kill him!!! Muahahhaha XD
But the ending was cute. And so wibbly inducing when Changmin just combs through Yoochun's wet hair while Yoochun sleeps ♥
'And Yoochun walks in with a box of donuts.' LMAO. Best line ever XD

oh, and my favorite part was the chapter with the alternating POVs. That was just adorable ♥

Congrats on finishing bb! *throws confetti at you*

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gompi April 16 2009, 22:50:58 UTC
Yeah the Yoomin are my loves I can't break them up.
Yeah I wanted to show they're not all about sex XD

Thanks for reading my A/N

*twirls as the confetti falls* Same to my dear ^^

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kamakazza April 16 2009, 23:43:58 UTC
*cheers* U didn`t kill chunnie after all!!! *dances* Yay for the YooMin!

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gompi April 16 2009, 23:47:04 UTC
I wouldn't kill Chun, Changmin needs him

*sparkles in eyes*

I'm just a hopeless romantic XD

Yay for yoomin

thanks for the comment

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