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gommyommy

Fic: Always

Jun 23, 2011 17:18

Summary: Gilbert’s been poisoned and Vincent has the antidote. Could Vincent be helping his brother for his own selfish desires? Fluffy, creepy, sad, introspective. Chapter 61 spoilers.

Rating: R

Words: 1725
Writer's Note: Thanks total_alias , for beta-ing! You are teh emosewA.
( What's happening to me? )

gilbert nightray, fanfiction, vincent nightray, ヴィンセント＝ナイトレイ, ギルバート＝ナイトレイ, vincent/gilbert, pandora hearts

Comments 4

total_alias June 24 2011, 04:10:46 UTC

Yayyyyy!!!! 8D
Yay! I love it!
I love the changes you made. Even before the changes I loved it. The whole thing was so eerie and yet incredibly sad. Especially with the new information we've received, you incorporated all of that perfectly.

Ahh... Mr. Raven, I see. I really like the dream and that chain who's name I forgot.

So, overall this was as emosewa as anything could ever get. Great way to get back into the writing feel. :D

Demios, it was Demios gommyommy June 24 2011, 04:56:02 UTC

Thanks! I was reading it over and thinking "what animal goes with Gilbert?" and then I was like, "Raven, duh" !

I knew it started with a "D" and ended with an "ios" total_alias June 24 2011, 05:02:30 UTC

But for some reason, I kept thinking Didios, but I knew that wasn't right. XD

You're welcome!
Pfft.

stolt_idiot June 26 2011, 11:59:15 UTC

I love it O.O. I like all your fanfics, but this one is probably my favorite. Vincent is perfectly IC, and so is Gil! I almost felt like crying when raeding this...poor Vince T.T.