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goldy_dollar

Untitled Drabble - H/Hr

Jan 08, 2006 20:41

Slipped back into H/Hr again.

Fandom: HP
Pairing: H/Hr
Timeline: Sometime post-HBP
A/N: Based on this squee-worthy pic by demosthenes91
Word Count: 100.
Rating: Of the PG variety.

( He can hear her heart beating. )

drabbles, t, harry/hermione, hp_fanfic

Comments 22

simply_strange January 9 2006, 01:49:43 UTC

Oh my goodness. So beautiful. But seriously, when is something you write not beautiful?

Awesome imagery. You wrote it so simply but I could just imagine it.

On a completely different note, isn't the smell of fresh laundry just the best?
Yup, it is. =) And freshly baked cookies. XD

goldy_dollar January 10 2006, 04:00:18 UTC

Thanks, sweetie.

Mmm. Cookies. I have such a chocolate craving. I ran out the other day and haven't had time to go to the grocery store! St00pid school.

annearchy January 9 2006, 01:57:42 UTC

Lovely, like everything you write :)

goldy_dollar January 10 2006, 04:01:01 UTC

Thanks, Anne.

*hugs*

ladybluestar January 9 2006, 02:10:26 UTC

Beautiful drabble, especially the difference between dark and light.

goldy_dollar January 10 2006, 04:01:49 UTC

Thanks! You know, it's been so long since I've written H/Hr. It's such a little mushy pairing, my w00blets. *hugs*

halliemarie January 9 2006, 02:13:03 UTC

GAH... YOU TURN ME TO MUSH EVERY TIME... I hate you for that. :(

Okay, maybe I'm lying about the hating you thing, you know I loff you. :) But, but, but... you can make me want to grab a hold to them and never ever let go with only 100 words. Gah... you just break me apart with this and then don't have to courtesy to put me back together again, but I still love it.

(I knew it wouldn't be long before you'd be back to the land of H/Hr at least for a little while...)

goldy_dollar January 10 2006, 04:03:11 UTC

Aww! That was such nice feedback. And for a little 100 word drabble too! *smooch*

(I knew it wouldn't be long before you'd be back to the land of H/Hr at least for a little while...)

Haha. Well. I'd like to "hear" them again in my head because I still have a novel-length called All Nights to finish!

exhaledeeply January 9 2006, 02:16:42 UTC

I love it! I love it a lot. It's very them.

lolz @ laundry.

goldy_dollar January 10 2006, 04:03:44 UTC

Yay. Thanks, sweetie.

HEY. FRESH LAUNDRY IS AWESOME.

Cleanliness makes me happy.

exhaledeeply January 10 2006, 04:07:35 UTC

YES. ALL OF MY BOYFRIENDS MUST SMELL LIKE LAUNDRY DETERGENT. WHAT A TURN-ON.