Comments | goldinvein: Part 3

choclitbunny in goldinvein

Part 3

Jun 23, 2009 11:55

( Part Three )

choclitbunny, bandom big bang, pg-13, patd, ryan/brendon

Comments 11

nyquil_love June 27 2009, 06:03:29 UTC

Oh my gosh Lydia, I loved it!
I've been very excited to read this since you first started talking about it.
It certainly did not disappoint.

I loved the way that you wrote the dialogue. It was very believable for the time period, but still believable for the characters as well.

I am not surprised at your inclusion of the sexy, seductive belly dancing troupe.
I liked them! :D

Very well done, my dear.

nataliee93 June 29 2009, 01:25:54 UTC

Okay. wow. This has got to be the best fic i've ever read :) it was totally awesome x

inthenameofjuc July 6 2009, 17:14:17 UTC

Absolutely stunning.

vaginasandsuch July 14 2009, 05:23:42 UTC

i love this! peter and patrick the fugitives! the escaping in a cloud of dust! ryan's character, in general! brendonnn! i love that they had to train, that everyone worked so hard, that pete is the uncontested leader! i love every bit of this. ♥

laniaaa July 16 2009, 12:50:46 UTC

i loved this so, so much(: their characters and pete, i have such a soft spot for him :L the belly dancers made my day ;D