Over It

[aeslis]

Over It
Pairing: Nino/Masami, Ohmiya
Word Count: ~9500
Summary: It's time for Nino to grow up. Ohno's there to help him along.
Notes: All the love in the world to the amazing, amazing floweranza, who held my hand through this. (And man did I cling. Hard.) To rinalin, for all her input, and to ltgmars, my first beta on this long journey. Written for the je_ficgames challenge

Comments

[coffee_hanjan]

This was great! I loved the realistic aspect of the whole thing.

Thanks for sharing!

[aeslis]

Thank you for reading!

[rio_sora]

ah....awesome! or the proper word is perfect!
love it so much, thanks a lot for sharing^^

[aeslis]

Perfect is a word I'd love to accept, but I'm not sure I can!

However, I'll gladly accept the love. :D Thank you, and thanks for reading!

[arashijun]

Keymshing is ll I'd be able to do. >.

[aeslis]

LOL--that's all right, keysmashing is more than welcome. :)

[blufox_o7]

I am in love with the entire piece.

I would reread this when I get back home tonight, but right now, despite having read it in a time crunch, I am still heavily in love with it.

I love the confrontation Nino had with Ohno, and the one Nino had with Ohno. Both were very raw in nature and so beautifully done. I also love how Nino talks about kissing other girls and wanting to change-- his whole character circling with imperfection and wanting to change, not to be perfect but to be better.

AND JUST. UGH. INCOHERENT. I CANNOT EVEN PROCESS ENOUGH WORDS TO EQUAL YOUR ~9500 WORDS OF GREATNESS. But, really, I loved it. A whole lot. :)

Oh, and just for the record, because I'm a sap, my favorite line is, But Ohno is the most important person in his life--more important than Masami, because for Ohno, Nino is willing to try. ♥

[aeslis]

Those scenes--man, I struggled hard with those, so it's nice to hear they worked for you. Nino's slow reach towards change was especially difficult, since he's always talking about how never changes and he likes that about himself. But I figured it would take something drastic and important like this for him to want to consider it.

It really isn't that great of a fic! Honestly, I'm surprised it's been received so well. But of course I'm really glad that you liked it. :D ♥

[yazura]

beutifully beautifull TT_TT
take my heart?

[aeslis]

You'll need your heart, so I'll let you keep it. ;)

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)