Mujintou

[aeslis]

Mujintou
Pairing: Ohmiya
Rating: Adult
Word Count: ~16000
Summary: Arashi have the perfect 10th anniversary celebration planned, but it goes horribly wrong. Ohno's not hugely upset about it, though...
A/N: Beta done by primroseshows and augustfai, and this is a better fic because of them.

Comments

[zelflame]

I cannot love on this enough--as proven by my commenting here even after gushing a great deal to you already :D

The IMAGERY. The PLOT. The CHARACTERIZATION. This is absolutely everything a fic should be and nothing that it should not. It is long and delicious and, well, you know, amazing ♥

There are so many ways in which Ohmiya is cannon, and it was a daring thing to take on such improbable (though fandom-appropriate XD) circumstances to be the catalyst for their interactions. But I don't think I've seen anything that's done it better in any sense.

I'll say it again: I am so so SO glad you created this; it has made my life just that much brighter :)

[aeslis]

Let me reply to you months after the fact: Thank you so much for the lovely comment. :) There are things I could certainly do better, I think, but when I reread it now I'm still a little shocked that I wrote something like this.

I'm really glad that you liked it! ♥

[babyrubysoho]

OK, I couldn't wait, I had to read it now!
I can't believe I never found this before. It's perfect! It's my favourite type of Ohmiya fic, loads of stuff happening and just this quiet, understated vein of connection running through it, even when things get awkward. It's like an inevitability (ok, that's cheesy, but I can't explain what I mean). Your Ohno is just lovely.

Also, I love adventurous, self-sufficiency stories, so yeah...just perfect! I will be reading this again :)

[aeslis]

Thanks! I think I only posted it on Kotobayori, probably. That might limit the number of people who see my writing. :) Perhaps I should change that.

[mongo_o_o]

i know its months after you wrote this but i just read it now and..i LOVE it <3 seriously. i have no words to describe how much. it just made my day :)

did i ever cmnt on your fics? sorry, if not, i'm really bad with commenting m( _ _)m

[aeslis]

Here I am a yearrr later to say: thank you for the comment. Even if you are bad at commenting on fics, I am clearly bad at replying to them, so we make a good team! I am really happy that you liked it, and thank you so much for taking the time to say something. :)

[aeslis]

Thank you so much! With Ohmiya, purity is questionable, but they can be very sweet. :D

[wy_nike]

ohmygosh. i finally found you again!!!
i read this when you first posted it up on arashirabu when i was on a holiday, and when i came back, i couldnt find it for the death of me. and seriously, i searched all over arashirabu. was so upset. =(
but YAY <3
i loved reading this and i seriously laughed at how the coconut owed nino. kekeke. and just, everything about this. thank u so much for sharing ^^

[aeslis]

Oh, wow, that was like two years ago! And then you managed to find it. :D Thank you so much for commenting!

Nino and his little feud with the coconut is a great bit, haha. But he won in the end!