Part 9 of the CAA fanfic - Beating around the bush, one chapter at a time.

[goldenspines]

Part 9:

Author's Notes: So yay, I managed to add four more characters into the story with this chapter. XD Except they only get minor appearances right now, but don't worry, they'll play some important roles soon.  I hope most people can assume that Hana is Hana Ryuuzaki from CAA, by the way. I think she only found out about my fanfic last week,

Comments

[kaguya_no_miko]

Sorry I didn't get a chance to read this earlier this afternoon 8( I was trading off holding the baby with my mom, so I was on and off ^^ I would've gotten to it earlier this evening, but FF was being a buttface ^^;

"I see my aim was a bit off." he helped Lucky sit up and at that moment everyone noticed her leg wound. Everyone stood up and rushed to help Lucky off the table, which resulted in many people running into one another and eventually,

Lol, I'm so glad I wasn't taking a drink of my pepsi when I read this part XDD I can also so picture UC saying that in real life XDD

I've been hanging around Corrie a little too long :P I noticed this...

falled (fallen) ^^

I can't wait to read more.. Now I wish everyday was Thursday XDD

[ich1990]

Just thought I would let you know that I have been reading this, and that I think you have been doing an excellent job of maintaining the personalities of CAA members throughout the story.

As for my contribution to spelling corrections:

This boat is fast enough to get us to Oklahoma in not time at all, why not take me all the way there?