[fanfic] The Pursuit of Perfection

[goldengrimoire]

Title: The Pursuit of Perfection
Pairing: Sasori/Sakura
Genre: Romance
Word Count: 1581
Rating: NC-17 (explicit sexual content)
Warnings: bondage, dom/sub, sadomasochism, orgasm denial, blood (a little)
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto.
Summary: The sounds that slipped from her lips were just as sweet whether she was responding to pleasure or pain, making

Comments

[hieronymousb]

Wow, that was quite hot. XD I'm kind of liking the BDSM angle.

Of course, they always were, whether he made her retort angrily, shed tears, or moan his name. Sakura seemed to have a thousand moods, and Sasori wanted to observe, classify, and record every one of them and what triggered them, until he would be able to call up any one of them on command. He was determined to perfect his art as a puppeteer by completely mastering this puppet as he had all of his others; unfortunately, she always kept making it frustratingly difficult for him by responding differently every time.

Although, the satisfied, loving smile that she gave him when he lowered her gently to the ground made him think that perhaps the pursuit of perfection could be almost as rewarding as achieving it.

Fabulous ending. I like how a part of it, for him, is cataloguing expressions so he can be a perfect puppeteer, but she gets something from this, too, and he enjoys that she does. It's a good argument for the appeal of the 'ship.

[goldengrimoire]

Thanks. BDSM is so natural for these two. XD

Fabulous ending. I like how a part of it, for him, is cataloguing expressions so he can be a perfect puppeteer, but she gets something from this, too, and he enjoys that she does. It's a good argument for the appeal of the 'ship.

I had really wanted to write a fetish-y story where they're actually lovers, instead of the captor/prisoner scenario that's more common for the ship. People in love do kinky stuff too! :D

[goldengrimoire]

Hee, glad you liked it. :)

The wrongness is what makes it so very right. ♥

[kusuriurii]

eeee.

ilu

[goldengrimoire]

Thanks! :D

[imthelonely_one]

FUCK sasosaku is always hot as hell. i don't know what it is but seriously!

[goldengrimoire]

It's true, they're just so hot together. :)

Also, icon love!

whoaa....

[itachigirl]

you just made me love this couple even more...thank you, you amazing author you ♥