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golden_reverie

Newspapers and Papercuts

Oct 05, 2009 18:03

A fanfiction focused on Germany and Italy from Hetalia Axis Powers. I hope you enjoy it, comments and critiques are appreciated :)

The glow of morning filtered through the dappled lace curtains that blocked the majority of the sunlight from flooding into the earth-toned study. A burly man sat promptly behind an oak desk in a large ( Read more... )

germany italy america england usa uk bri

Comments 4

sith_chan October 6 2009, 02:40:40 UTC

I giggled like a madman. Fantasic job for a fitst fanfic! Are you secretly a pro?? Everyone was so in character, so kudos to you.

Hope to see more!

golden_reverie October 6 2009, 02:57:30 UTC

Really? Wow, thanks so much for your kind words and the comment! Actually, I've only seen like 3 episodes so that's wonderful that I was able to capture their characters :3

Yeah, this is my first completed fanfic; I've been working on some others so technically this could be considered my 2nd or 3rd but yeah, I'm really new to writing fanfiction so I am so happy you liked the story(and actually took the time to read it) and that I was able to make you laugh :)

Good news, I am writing a USA x UK based fanfic next, explainging where they are headed(you know how they are going to visit UK's aunt in the story? Well the next fanfic is going to be a continuation of it, retelling the evets that happened to them during their trip to Scotland, where they are supposed to have a picnic at the beach with UK's Aunt, Mary(aka Queen Mary of Scotland xD) Sorry if that was hard to understand!

sith_chan October 6 2009, 04:39:16 UTC

Well, even if you've only seen three episodes, you've gotten them down pretty well. The only concern I have is saying that Italy is a teenager. As stated in the manga, he is of at least 20 years of age in regards to his looks, so using the term 'teenager' might not be the best idea (it can cause confusion to readers).

You're welcome.

Not so much that it bothered me, I really didn't have too much trouble understanding. But yay! I will read it if you post it up!!!

golden_reverie October 7 2009, 04:39:43 UTC

Thanks, that's good to know. In my opinion, I veiwed Italy as a young boy compared to the others, as he is cute and small but yes, thanks for telling me that he is around 20.

Goodie :) I am no where close to being done with it, it's just a idea that I'll probably get around to once I've finished uploading other things and writing the rest of my other stories