Oh, Brother- Part 4

[golden_02]

Disclaimer: Still got nothing.

Pairing: Edmund/Lucy

Rating: NC-17...to be safe.

Summary: Ed/Lu smut.

Author’s Note: Part 4. You know how originally it was only supposed to be a series of one-shots? Yeah, that didn’t work out too well, did it? This is a story. I kinda just realized that. God, I’m sad and pathetic. I’m…sathetic. Hehehe.

Comments

[golden_02]

Thank-you very much! I'm happy you liked that line because honestly (I think that's my favorite line in the whole story) it kinda shows how vulnerable Ed really is. Thank you so much again! *gushes with happiness*

[jadehaku]

Yeah that line definately rings true for Ed. You did a wonderful job on this beautiful smut piece. How you wrote it was quite sensual. I hope you make another one ^__^

[golden_02]

Ah! Thanks you so much! I'm actually tossing another one-shot around about Ed/Lu but through Susan's eyes. It doesn't tie in with this series so I'm just waiting to see how it goes! Thank you again for the review!

[hotfruits]

Amazing, as always! I loved Edmund at the end, it was so heart warming but so tragic too.

[golden_02]

Thank-you so much! Oh Edmund, my heart breaks for him. I love him and Caspian and Peter to bits! hehehe. Thank-you for the review!

[istderjemand]

Beautiful.

[golden_02]

Thank you so much!

[fly_to_moon]

This was really nice, tender, loving smut. I was rereading the previous chapters and it is a complete contrast to his encounter with Susan. I can't wait to see where you go with this.

[golden_02]

Thanks so much! I want his and Lucy's relationship to be much more deeper than his and Su's. So I'm happy that you liked it and noticed the contrast! I'm hoping that you won't be disappointed with the next chapters! lol! Thanks again!