Avatar, Zuko "An Order" Drabble

[goldberry]

I barely stopped myself from posting this in 31_days before realizing that their userinfo hasn't been updated for the new month yet. Saved myself some embarrassment, I did! ♥ So of course it goes here because I'm not sure what else to do it with it. Starting small, guys, starting small.

Title: An Order
Day/Theme: January 7th - "don't remember and don't

Comments

[endou]

Short and sweet. I love the gentle parallel to the title and the end.

And I find that "cute" should be used in a review if, and only if, there is an excessive amount of fluff or crack!fluff.

[goldberry]

And I find that "cute" should be used in a review if, and only if, there is an excessive amount of fluff or crack!fluff.

Exactly! "Cute" should not be used on angsty SMEX pieces. GRRRRRRR.

[sahara_storm]

Ah, you do Zuko's broodiness wonderful justice. ♥ I love the image of him drinking tea to make up for Uncle's presence. ^^ Lovely as usual~.

(Argh, and especially if the review consists SOLELY of the word 'cute'. I'm like... 'Are you talking about the fic, or Neji? o__O'

[goldberry]

CUTE should just be stricken from review vocabulary. XDXD

Thanks, dear! ♥ I'm glad you liked the drabble.

[lemonyloyce]

I'm not sure how I missed this last night... but I'm glad I found it this morning! *squishes* Love it- pure and simple.

*pokes you for more Zuko angst*

Psst - http://aj-rayne.livejournal.com/14660.html?#cutid1

[fairywine]

WOOHOO! First Avatar piece, YES. You did such a great job of capturing everyone's favorite emo-prince. The tea part was an especially nice touch, I felt. I just hope there are some Toph works in your future. Because Toph is love. ♥