The 14th: Chapter 4

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Written by: Kanemaki Tomoco
Original Plan: Nomura Tetsuya and Nojima Kazushige
Illustration: Amano Shiro
Copyrighted by Disney, Square Enix and Touchstone Pictures
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Notes: No profit is gained from these translations. Every effort is made to make them as accurate as possible, however, due to factors including the differences

Comments

[greatwhitewolf]

Lol, I liked Riku: "I'm in a really bad mood right now." :D Gahh I hate Vexen. I fought him last night in Re Chain of Memories. I hate his freaking shield! Awww I loved how Axel was like, "don't break him" and he wasn't exactly sure why he said it. And I love the references to Roxas.
And so, Axel manipulates Replica into doing his dirty work. It's amazing how manipulative and persuasive Axel can be. It makes me like him even more. ;____; WOW this was really interesting. I'm really enjoying getting into Axel's head. I still don't get why Axel had to get rid of Zexion. Marluxia and Larxene I understand. And Vexen too. But why Zexion? I liked him! ;___;

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I too love how this gives new perspective to those ooooold lines way back from CoM :3

Mistake D:

[sorinha_fantasy]

Castle Oblivion, tenth floor.

“So you’re Riku.” Vexen had been lying in wait for Riku, who had just arrived on the floor.

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"Tenth floor"? Isn't it "underground" or another english word for the ones under the floor? 8D
Because... Riku never goes to the tenth floor, actually D:

Re: Mistake D:

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Sorry for the confusion ^^; I fixed it~

Thanks for pointing it out to me!

Re: Mistake D:

[sorinha_fantasy]

Well, I'm translating it into portuguese, right? I need to advise anything n_n
So, that's nothing at all~

Re: Mistake D:

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Oh! How is that going?

[ruthyuki999]

“A friend of Ansem’s-that’s half right, I suppose. But I’ll tell you this, he’s different to the Ansem you know. He’s Ansem, but then he’s not… that is to say, he’s ‘nobody’.” Vexen closed in on Riku.

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“He’s nobody? Huh-I’m in a really bad mood right now. Be clearer.”

hahaha... I love this little exchange.

“Huh-I was only just born. I’ll only get stronger from here. I’ll even top you, soon. The next time we fight will be your last,” bragged the Replica.

...*snicker* I'm just so mature, aren't I?

Overall, this chapter was awesome. :D Insights into what Axel was thinking, yay~

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HAHA I TOTALLY DIDN'T SEE THAT

AM I GETTING OLD D:

[dreamersg]

is this what really happened in the game the replica dispeared because axel sweet talked him and are these oringal transulations from heartstaion sorry for asking too much

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Well, in the game Axel did sweet talk the Replica into eating Zexion and going off to fight Riku at the end, at least. That scene where the two of them watch Vexen and Sora's battle isn't in the game. Here is the game script if you'd like to read it!

And yes, these are the same translations as the ones that were on heartstation. In fact, the ones on my blog are the originals and those were rehosted ;D

Don't worry about asking questions, I'm always happy to answer!

[dreamersg]

I meant we axel larxene and vexen talked after he left

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Click the link in the above post and you can check the game script for yourself ;)