Comments | gold_bluepoint: SD Minibang Fic: Five Times Sam was Embarrassed (but also turned on) [Part 2]

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SD Minibang Fic: Five Times Sam was Embarrassed (but also turned on) [Part 2]

Oct 09, 2011 10:20

(Part One)

( Dean has had an unrivaled ability to humiliate Sam throughout their lives. )

sam/dean, fanfic, supernatural, my fic, those winchester kids

Comments 60

big_heart_june October 9 2011, 17:45:28 UTC

This is perfection, I LOVED it. LOVED getting into Sammy's headspace and your Dean voice is spot-on. God, I love these boys and I love and adore how perfectly you write them. Also! hotness! :DDD
Thank you! ♥

gold_bluepoint October 10 2011, 23:41:37 UTC

Oh my goodness, thank you! :DDD I love Sam's feeeeeelings about everything and the way Dean's sense of humor plays out in his dialogue in Show, so I love trying to capture that. I love them (and they love each other!) so much so yay! I am really glad their characterization worked so well for you! Also HEE HEE thank you!

deadflowers5 October 9 2011, 19:00:39 UTC

This was so good! How I missed the classic spn and their fic! Thank you for this!

gold_bluepoint October 10 2011, 23:48:44 UTC

Hooray! I love classic Winchesters and SPN, both the show and the fanfiction, and I am really thrilled that I managed to capture that feel for you! Thank you.

nynxlynx October 9 2011, 19:53:21 UTC

This was wonderful. It did feel exactly like classic spn fic, and you wrote them just how I imagine them - Dean all cocky and bright like the sun, and Sam loving him so and just wallowing around gloriously in misery because of it until he realizes that Dean loves him just as much. And this was so very well written too...I loved it!

gold_bluepoint October 11 2011, 00:02:41 UTC

I love oldschool canon and the kinds of fanfic people wrote in the first couple years of the show so much, so it is awesome that my fic felt like that to you! And, eee, that is exactly how it goes. Wallowing around gloriously in misery is a GREAT way of putting it. And Dean does love Sam *so* hugely. Thank you so much!

sienata October 9 2011, 20:34:48 UTC

great story. you had me laughing out loud so many times - dean was such a pain in sam's ass! i loved it. and i love how you brought them together in the end - great wrap up!! thank you. :)

gold_bluepoint October 12 2011, 21:41:46 UTC

Hee, thanks! Dean is a HUGE pain in Sam's ass. Sam's favorite pain, though, fortunately! I'm really glad it made you laugh- I always chuckle when I'm writing things and then worry "but is this going to be funny to anyone else?!"
Thank you for reading! :D

obstinatrix October 9 2011, 21:09:10 UTC

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The last section is absolutely the perfect complement to the rest; the very last line in particular is so absolutely them I can't even deal. I love this.

gold_bluepoint October 12 2011, 21:57:25 UTC

oh my goodness hearteyes for meeeee??? 8D fjskjdfl

I am HUGELY gratified that it meshed organically with the rest of the story so well for you; I really didn't want it to just be porn stuck on at the end because I needed it to wrap up the story, emotionally. And then I got down to the last lines and went AH BUT HOW DO I END IT for a moment but then I was like, well, obviously.... I am thrilled you liked! Thank you for reading. ♥