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Aug 24, 2008 20:06


And so it was later after years of their acquaintance, when his growth which he had so longed for, so that she need not look down to see him, finally came.  For then he  shot up and up in a parody of his desire for dignity, limbs beanpoling outward twice as thin and awkward as they had been, leaving him tripping over his own toes, bony ankles ( Read more... )

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zempasuchil December 19 2009, 08:50:59 UTC
AWWWWWWW
gawky Aang is so... sad! and poignant but he outgrows his flying thing :((((
this is so lovely. I couldn't imagine a lovelier Aang/Katara piece, I really couldn't. And it makes so much sense - he looks up to her and she moves forward by herself so much! eeeee. somehow this is so happy and sad at the same time. <333

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gold_bluepoint December 19 2009, 10:49:59 UTC
I know! :( But it had to happen. In my mind Aang is going to be ENORMOUSLY TALL when he grows up. (I have more thoughts on yaoi the GAang adult heights here if you're interested in my mad ramblings.) But, but, I'm sure he'll be able to make/get a new one somehow!
(I actually have this whole theory about how the Air nomad bloodline gradually reappears over the generations and the mountains start repopulating very slightly within the Gaang's lifetime. They can figure out how to make more gliders!)

<333 Thank you! Looking back over it, I think there are some clunky sentences, but I'm really glad to hear it still carries the emotional sense I was trying to convey. It is bittersweet, but they always manage to meet each other where it counts. <3

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zempasuchil December 19 2009, 22:56:53 UTC
hahaha! that could totally fit though - and I really love the idea that For a while Sokka is DEEPLY AFFRONTED by Aang's sudden hugeness. Because Sokka DOES that sort of thing XD
oh he'll definitely get a new one or make a new one - his fiend the inventor will make a super awesome one! along the same lines of the super awesome one that Teo has!
I really really really want the Air nomads to come back! but apparently all air nomads are airbenders, and the whole point is that Aang is the last airbender right? well... that's what fanfiction is for, anyway :))
they always manage to meet each other where it counts. - this is wonderful, and so true to the show (like when Aang is like, Katara be my girlfriend and kiss me! and Katara is like, But there's a war on and this has got to wait!), and so grown up. man this show is the most sophisticated kids show like ever.

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