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gokulex59

Black Pearl

Jul 23, 2013 00:02

XOXO Camp Week One, Challenge One: Write in One Hour Limit
Title: Black Pearl
Pairing: None
Rating: K+
Genre: Humor
Length: 1 153 words
Notes: Actually, I was working on another challenge but it's gonna need tomorrow to be completed and it definitely isn't something to post in parts, so I wrote something quick on computer. September Edit: That shit ( Read more... )

character: chen, character: lu han, genre: humor, character: xiu min, character: lay, character: tao, fandom: exo, length: one-shot, character: kris, rated: k+

Comments 13

aufashafira July 23 2013, 13:26:14 UTC

OH MY GOD HOW COULD YOU. I THOUGHT THEY'RE GANGSTERS IN DISGUISE OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT BUT. BUT.

gokulex59 July 23 2013, 18:54:33 UTC

I feed on your disappointment, baby.

hibinoasako July 25 2013, 15:48:53 UTC

HOW COULD YOU KILL MY EXCITEMENT LIKE THAT OVER A VACUUM CLEANER I THOUGHT THEY STOLE A JEWELRY OHMYGOFODFJLDKGLJDF

gokulex59 July 25 2013, 20:57:42 UTC

I FEED ON YOUR ENJOYMENT THAT'S HOW

ifancycrush August 8 2013, 20:11:22 UTC

This is great!
The way you started the story made me think they are some badass ninjas or whatnot, very clever to make everyone so curious, very clever indeed.
I'm not sure why but the 'stop the fucking bus' part just cracked me up. And I pretty much died from laughter when I read the last sentence.
(Yes, I'm still giggling.)

gokulex59 August 8 2013, 21:02:16 UTC

Your comment perfectly pictures what I aimed for.

Really? You laughed?! Wow that's more than I expected. Guess breaking everyone's excitement works out at the end somehow.

donawhalee August 16 2013, 13:09:11 UTC

I was waiting for the grand ending and BAM plot twist ;~; how could you1!!???! hahahha but i enjoyed the rush and everything. I laughed really hard at the ending tbh;~; babysoo's flustered and angry face sobs ;~;

gokulex59 August 16 2013, 13:14:18 UTC

I should have opened up a bet of one dollar at the beginning and required the money once everyone is disappointed at the end! I'd be rich!

Hahaha yeah, but I don't think EXO members (especially M) don't find it so endearing aren't day. I'm seriously happy you laughed, that was my intent. Thank you so much!

mehrainbow January 5 2014, 22:01:35 UTC

LOOL I seriously didn't know what I was getting into when I clicked on this. Halfway through the story when they were running together, I realized it was a bit more mundane than a secret top mission or something and thought they would be overtaken by fangirls. But then they addressed the black pearl, and I was like, "WHAAAAAAAAAAT. Dat thing is real?!" And got sucked into the notion that they were on a secret top mission all over again. LOL I just love stories with twists (sucker for mystery right here). Especially humorous ones. Poor D.O. LOOOOL After I read that last sentence, I finally realized what the taxi driver was really referring to. Mah gawd. I broke out in a huge joker like grin when I read that. Mang, I don't think I could ever forget this. Kudos to you! (≧∇≦)/ End huge paragraph of a comment. OTL

And did I hear this was a one hour challenge? o_________o If so, I shall dub you "genius" from now on. (¬‿¬)

Hurdurrrr I saw dat lil bit of xiuhan interaction in der. I feed on that yo. (●´□`)❤

gokulex59 January 31 2014, 11:36:38 UTC

PIZZA BLESS THIS COMMENT.

THANK YOU. BLESS YOU.

Also yeah of course that xiuhan interaction it didn't feel canon without it you feel me.

And waaaaaat. Geniuuuuuus. I usually spend five hours on 2000 this accidentally happened- I mean I am a genius- I am not but- COMPLIMENTS MAKE WEIRD THINGS TO ME.