Ways of Binding, Part 2

May 28, 2007 03:17



A rather benign example could be found in the way the Byakuya stared at Renji whenever they sparred.

The brazen redhead loved to spar with his coldly efficient taichou. Byakuya always pretended that such exercise was beneath him. Renji knew better.

Their sparring matches grew longer and more intense as Renji became stronger. The ( Read more... )

fanfic, byakuya, gogochan, ways of binding, yaoi, renji, voyeurism, bleach, bya/ren, angst

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fierydragonsky May 28 2007, 13:06:37 UTC
I don't often buy into this pairing. The way you're managing the characterization, though, I'll definitely buy into it for this story. :) Looking forward to seeing more.

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gogo_ergo_sum May 28 2007, 23:08:30 UTC
thank you! that means a lot to gogo. xoxo

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artemisms May 28 2007, 21:53:12 UTC
Okay, Byakuya getting spanked on the booty and YELPING as he falls over his desk is just eff-ing priceless!!! I could not stop laughing!! Thank you soooo much for this XD Can't wait for the next part ^^

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gogo_ergo_sum May 28 2007, 23:07:23 UTC
Thanks, friend! This chapter took gogo a while to write. Next one will be shorter, and a bit smuttier... Hope to get it finished soon.

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gogo_ergo_sum June 4 2007, 14:49:48 UTC
I am starting to feel like yer stalker... And I will catch you on IM one of these days...

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emokid_ginlove May 29 2007, 07:06:42 UTC
Oh nice...Hime-chan likes it rough. Oh my goth thats just die hard funny! I love this chapter! Cant wait for more!

Love ya Emo Gin

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gogo_ergo_sum May 29 2007, 07:35:18 UTC
Thank you! And LOVE that you call Bya "hime-chan." gogo totally has Renji calling him that very, very soon. Thanks for reading and commenting. XO

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katiefoolery May 29 2007, 12:22:43 UTC
I'm really enjoying the characterisation in this story so far. I swear I felt chills from how cold Byakuya was when he finally noticed Renji - that was so well done.

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gogo_ergo_sum May 29 2007, 23:17:40 UTC
Thanxxx! Didn't mean for this chapter to be so damn long. Just happened that way. Now... on to the juicy pron goodness!

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chloevien May 31 2007, 21:15:37 UTC
I love the parts which Renji noticed all Byakuya gestures are erotic, the way he chewed the wax from his finger, how he played with the smoke from the candles,etc, oh my Gosh, that were really erotic (I imagined all of those hahaha). And Renji spanked his aristocratic ass hahahahaha. Ah Renji, Byakuya is erotic pure, I'm agree *lol*
Just love your fic, can't wait for another chapter. Lots of love for you:)
xxx
Chloevien

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gogo_ergo_sum May 31 2007, 22:15:19 UTC
Lots of love for you, too!! Next chapter should be up soon. Things are gonna get a bit freaky, but in a good way. Thanxxx for the comments!! xoxo

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