What I like about this, is that you didn't turn Parker into the evil villain. You could have easily went that way, but you didn't and I really like that. Piz was slightly too clueless for me, but he was a little clueless on the show as well so I can't fault you for that.
Anyway, I really enjoyed reading this and I can't wait to see what you turn out for the next challenge! :)
It's funny because I really had to hold back with Parker on this. I reaaaaaaaaaaallllly don't like her and if I do write her in something, that tends to come out. And Piz... while I don't like him, I don't hate him either which tends to translate one way or the other in my stuff. I kind of needed him to be the really bad, clueless boyfriend in this so I could highlight the best things about Logan and the LoVe relationship in general. Especially those things that the Piz/V and Parker/Logan relationships were lacking.
But I completely agree with you... there is no way Piz could be as completely clueless as they portrayed him on the show. I think the only time we got to see that was the last episode when he witnessed "the look."
Thanks again for taking the time to read and comment and I'm looking forward to seeing what you have in store for us for the next challenge!!
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Anyway, I really enjoyed reading this and I can't wait to see what you turn out for the next challenge! :)
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It's funny because I really had to hold back with Parker on this. I reaaaaaaaaaaallllly don't like her and if I do write her in something, that tends to come out. And Piz... while I don't like him, I don't hate him either which tends to translate one way or the other in my stuff. I kind of needed him to be the really bad, clueless boyfriend in this so I could highlight the best things about Logan and the LoVe relationship in general. Especially those things that the Piz/V and Parker/Logan relationships were lacking.
But I completely agree with you... there is no way Piz could be as completely clueless as they portrayed him on the show. I think the only time we got to see that was the last episode when he witnessed "the look."
Thanks again for taking the time to read and comment and I'm looking forward to seeing what you have in store for us for the next challenge!!
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